All verses may be ok.....This is off the top of my head.....no beef...

Do not ask us for assonance syllable help for most people do not know what you are talking about. Those who do have tried to help you, but you've either blown up on them and started doing you played disses or keep on bugging them with the same question. When you ask about multiples did you think to check OMB's tutorial. Always check tutorials here, or probably Rapbattles.com since they have been around longer.

Lets get a few of your misconceptions corrected.

1. Rapping isn't a science.......mostly its just having something that rhymes such as Tit and bit, or suck and duck together. You can get more complicated with evaluation and constipation which has more syllables.
like:
"The evaluations of segregation send hate across nations"
Hate held held like constipation, wont reciprocate Lincoln's emancipation"
BLAH!!

That is some internals, and metafours........

A metafour is saying one thing and meaning or refferring to another
like this:
kids hopeless got nothing to loose
hes seen less than Tom Cruise

Seen less and Tom Cruise being an almost midget create the punch

To do personals find something on your oppnent his signature, words hes said, or pics he's posted......and use it in your verse

"Clap this kid hard like thunder lightning bolts from God
If he rode strobe as much as Kyro He'd already be mod"
me vs Shabba

Well I complete this later

Its part of my tutorial
Rapping for Idiots

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he still wont understand hes that dumb...

Look whos talking X

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shut up...atleeast i elevate the most fastest on this site wait n see ill do somin to all vets like you and others in a month or 2 ill be one of the best...but im not calllin you on dont get it backwards

nooe you havent elevated the fastes........I did in topicals....1st one was dope then i got really good as ive been told... all in like 3 weeks or less....

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LOL watch sinner ask for more help and PM bigchase 20 times....

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

BigChase, you let yourself in for it there, lol.

You arent elevatin X.

I cant believ you won against Mike Hawk, that shit was mad

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i didnt win...but i can now i elevated...sence then listen distilled its not good to battle i elevate now i know your weakness n shit i study all the vets shit thats how i work im like copywrite kinda but i write my own lryics elevate off toehrs lryics

That actually did not make sense.

You know my weakness?

It's not good to battle??

You study vets??

Do you even know what a vet is?

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stop beefin and gimme feedback on this tutorial

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ya Distilled lieks to say shit to me because im gonna be one of the best on this site...but i wont be the best but i will be one of them...and BigChase Hope to battle some time...sry for this beefin and yes i know what a vet is distilled and yes i study them for elevation thats what smart people do...well i guess saying its not good to battle is stupid...and yes i knwo your weakneeses punche syou lack wordplay to

ok...calm down bruh.......yo peep dis shit....

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First off you spell Metaphor like that.. not like Metafour.

Secondly.. Chase- You need to chill on the vocab'
Its good and all to have a large variety..
but when it means shit and doesn't flow..
Whats the point?

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

stfu mang..........

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