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Old 07-21-02, 04:37 PM   #1
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earth livin'

IP: 0090 4F63

a universe for me to journey
behind me the earth is turning
in orbital circle curcuit
surrounded by gases burning
inside is a search for purpose
above & beneath the surface
we love & we breed to flourish
we murder to feed & nourish
are kids into service workers
sure its not a perfect world its
earth & im certain were just
cursed form our birth & jergens
mistakes are made for learning purposes what have we learned in..
the last couple of a hundred of the worlds turns it
turns out, for every path crossed a bridge is burning
the call for change was made apparently nobody heard it
say word kid, your never gonna learn being a hermit
you'll never get the chance to put your foot down if yoru squirming
your faker than a perm your just another young suburban
unconcerned with understanding the way that his words determine
the way other people see us, the way that are karmas hurting
from kids web surfing in purges a re-occouring occourance
rest assured beneath the current the currency isn't courage
its cowardly intraverts with no culture or current worth
its the curve... to cantileever this earth into panic either the first man to see it screams or the masses are seeing believers

one part of a three verse track i just finished writing...
let me know what you think
read that & give me feedback
the feedback we need that
you cuss me we'll see cat...
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Old 07-21-02, 04:41 PM   #2
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damn!!!! dunny dis wordplay wass good strong vocab ur shyt is real. keep postin im lookn to see more of dat. uno
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Old 07-22-02, 01:33 PM   #3
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was deep in its own way...with some good use of vocab and overall wordplay...was one which just 'flowed' so well, and in general stayed on the 'track'.....real nice...felt it....respect...
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