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it was aight...
some nice decent punches n personals
but other lines wernt as strong
you need to work on havin less fillers...
ya rhymes seem like some of them are forced an u need to work on ya flow...
cause when i was readin it it was a lil hard to catch the melody, but it was pretty decent...
ya certainly elevatin, just keep doin what ya doin..

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yo bitch you need to quit rap your crap
the weak mc's needs to be zapped and capped
/\ opener blah who says zapped?

sinners back yo listenin to ya u sound aussie
might aswell make rock music go join ozzy
/\ ozzy is English and so am i

Good day m8 on a mic u sound like ur bein rapped
I penotrate through ya soul so ya will never elevate
/\ um i think u meant to say raped but it's not too strong

i'll put him in a microwave when he miss behaves
then we'll see who takes da first visit to da grave
/\ jus seems ur sayin shit to jus rhyme

see you think im twisted maby so but im gifted
my spirits lifted the australians spittin verse wid a lisp in
/\ um what? australians??? im English u herb lol

you keep giving me pms on msn takin to me like da UN
just fuck off you bitch I don't wanna be ya friend
/\ LOL u saying that um what was it u said...mad dog i wnna end this beef i like you why don't you like me???

go ask ya dad for a bend stop your rhymes der yellin
b4 I start sellin ya dad grandma at your local market
/\ no rhyme blah

don't even get me started my shit an't even departed
you'll problebly fall on knees cause your 2 broken hearted
/\ again jus sayin stuff that rhymes...to rhyme u need elevation

The mad dog an't never gonna win that is a fuckin sin!
just take it like a man you don't know where ive bin
/\ i beat u multiple times wit even weaker rhymes...see

go to an austrailian bar and sing fuck your family
your whole familys got aids some1 might catch da allergy
/\ again wit australian shit im UK mo fo lol and no aids in my fam so fake personal lol

Your dead grandmas up in hell when dat day she fell
she wasn't nothin mad dog just like ya mother a bad cell!!!
/\ no comment...but u'd think that u'd come up wit somethin a lil more original

Fuck you little ass traiter the mc newest faker
II saw the bitch workin at in crawly he's a baker!
/\ u spelt Crawley wrong and another fake personal...i ain't no baker lol

every time I rhyme I'm putting ya down to the ground
your scared an't eating ur startin 2 look like a grey hound
/\ in ur audio u sound shook...and u think im scared???...LMAO

not a bull dog No u can tell he's breathless at his flow
when you spit people run away can't stand no hoe
/\ another forced rhyme and u changed ur mind i thought i was a bulldog

I think he's having a nervous break down what a clown
wasn't nothing to shoot him wid a verse took him in 1 round
/\ how many rounds have there been???...i beat u 5 times on text many times on open mic and now on audio...i even beat this verse with feedback...omg what am i doing here?...

Sinner this is my last post on you finally i am aware u are only here because i continue to whore you and that somehow makes a name for you here...so this is it....goodbye...the battle is over...look over previous battles and feedbacks to locate the winner...u don't have to look any further than this post

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