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10-22-04, 11:35 AM
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***cITYSLICka***
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i'm lookin' for trouble.
IP: F2B1 8D50
on microphones i'm trouble some
like forest gump wit a double pump niccas get popped like bubble gum when i leave em' slumpt,i crumble chumps if rap was atest i'd pass leavin' you fukaz double flunkt and i'm sick of these cats wit da artificial intelligence dat shits irrelevant they should of learned dat from da president ya'll past being bird ass nicca's so i label em' pelicans and wait for dey talk cause i surely got some hell to bring ain't gone stop til' they flock off and ain't gon' b no settl-ing my shines 24 karats your's -the temporary bling from them metal rings you can dis my shit 100 hundred times and i'll still b hotter than them projected little metal things and nicca's listen,God gave you a brain so use it come at me hard-you must got a thing for losin' and i welcome all challengers to get layed down by a style equal to ninez equipt with infra-red&silencers
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE Last edited by Loveliss Grandz : 10-22-04 at 11:40 AM. Reason: appearance |
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10-22-04, 12:29 PM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: F2B1 8D50
feedback.....someone.......anyone.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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10-22-04, 12:43 PM
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GoD LiKe
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IP: 579F F01D
Kind of basic ryme scheme.
Good lines and good flow to this, I just feel if your gonna diss and drop punches, do it consitently my shines 24 karats your's -the temporary bling from them metal rings only line i thought was wack..... You got skills and will fit in here in no time
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10-22-04, 01:22 PM
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***cITYSLICka***
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thanx 4 the feed back.
IP: F2B1 8D50
understood.i felt that line was kind of lame too afta i read it back.i chose not to change it just out of the lack of fearing gettin dissed i guess.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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