First time postin rhymes.. lookin for opinions...

Yo let me hit up da mic
Big Sc00p in dis bitch bout to get rite

Spittin at you playas for da first time
Be careful, dis rook gotz rhymes

Thinkin my lyrics gonna be lame cuz i rep da south
You just mad i got lyrics you cant even mouth

Dats right im puttin da Carolinas on da map
NYC.. Cali... shit nah.. da south is where its at

Watch out for dis cat... ima drop da hottest verse
And leave yo ass like dem Sox... fukin cursed

Aight.. just wanted to give yall a feel...
But follow up playa.. dis cats fo real

it was okay i guess
dont seperate ya bars like that tho, makes the flow all fucked up