Im a Nooby doin Topical Im aight Tho.....I guess.......

everyone must be forgetting about

L.I
R-rated
Myself
Poppa Kap

were the original topical heads here then we all kinda stopped doing topicals

now its mostly

nostrodamus
big chase
abstrakt
I.Mind

and to be honest I.Mind is in the top 2 on this site and ill put money on it that she could beat over 90% of people in topicals on this site and thats werd

anyone who isnt listed either i dont know you or your not that ill you just boast highly of your own skills while no one else has declared to object...

so with that said have a good day hoecakes :-D

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Im Not On Your List Flow Intelligent, And Im A Dope Topical Writer. I Just Drop Many Topicals.

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

nostrodamus....he is the only good one i have seen yet ..

yes true true vango also ... theres a couple people i didnt mention but you should know who you are and vango's dope

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Nostradamus, what was with that Abstrakt battle, since when was he banned, or whateva.

BigChase, needs to battle more. but drops hott opn mics./

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Now heres a dope topical drop. topic was blind fury, 1st round of a topical tourney. Stop sleeping on my topical skill, peace.





She was everything I could imagine, how'd she get caught up in all these lies
Just yesterday I was planning our wedding, today Im plotting her demise
I can't describe these feelings, you could only imagine my surprise
The day I opened up the letter that was never meant to cross my eyes
The letter read "Dear Sarah, Thanks for coming to visit me last week"
"Its amazing how our love has grown from just a simple kiss on the cheek"
"I know you have a boyfriend,and Im sorry if loving you is a crime"
"But Ive dreamt about your visit and us making love a hundred times"
Now I know Im not alone and some of youve been in this boat
My hands began to sweat, I felt my heart inside my throat
See last weekend Sarah took a trip supposedly visiting close friends
Was our love just an illusion, was everything just all pretend
Just then I became enraged, A feeling like Ive never felt before
A "Blind Fury" overcame me, I grabbed my coat and hit the door
I slammed the gear shift in reverse, the speach I had rehearsed
I'd say "Sarah why'd you do this to me?"being careful not to curse
She'd say she didnt mean to hurt me, and everything would be alright
She'd kiss me on the cheek while crying, and hold me tight into the night
I wish I could say it went down like this but if I did well I'd be lying
Cuz the only thing going thru my head, was man this BITCH IS DYING!
I imagined her telling me it was over, how she met someone and was leaving
That the minute my mental snapped, fuck loving her,I was getting even
I pulled up at her house a strange car was running in the drive
"Man I fucking knew it, Im going to beat this bitch alive"
So I burst inside the house, I could feel that something just wasn't right
I ran upstairs to Sarahs room, opened the door turned on the light
My life was like a movie scene,but no movie could have ever wrote this plot
See Sarah lied motionless on the floor, it appeared that she'd been shot
Her Killer, the other boyfriend, he grasped the bloody letter in his hand
It said" Im sorry I cant do this anymore, See I TRULY LOVE THIS MAN"

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

woah that was dope and pretty deep hott nding brung a tear to my eye lol jk but the only thing that could help you out is more depth and emotion and better vocab once you got those characteristics locked you'll be unbeatable and remember multies are your friend use a couple more multies to grab the attention of the reader besides this your topical skill is good

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Word thanks Flow, i just dont do topicals that much anymore. concentrating on trying to get cool edit down.

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.