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Old 10-26-04, 02:02 AM   #16
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Just a played concept........Why in the fuck do people not vote on this board?

Uppin...if you leave a link it will be hit up with honesty..thank you.

He has me blacklisted so I couldnt vote but thats just me, gotta ask the rest of the people bout them.
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Old 10-26-04, 03:40 AM   #17
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ok thanks....Uppin..vote y'alll.......Pz
 
Old 10-26-04, 09:23 AM   #18
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Imma have to give this to Aus...

ajax: Ok you had some pretty decent shit but nothing really stood out to me... Like the evolve line that could of bin worded betta to make a betta punch/personal. But it just didn't have the same effect.
Before I started writing he was wishing me luck…
Look how quick he is to just give himself up…
^where was the punch in that^ that was just an example.
I liked ya opener but that was it.
Aus: I really liked this verse. Original lines in there too. Tha opener was funny as fuck. Nice personal and wordplay on his name. All ya bars were original i think. Realy nice use of metas in here too.
Your screwed, you dont know what kinda trouble your soakin in..
Cuz' i'd tell him elevation is key, but he lost the door to open it..
Nice Punch.
Nice use of metas also.
I give this to Aus for a better overall verse. Punches were original and humerous.

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Old 10-26-04, 02:41 PM   #19
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Originally Posted by Socrates
He has me blacklisted so I couldnt vote but thats just me, gotta ask the rest of the people bout them.


No i dont..............................
 
Old 10-26-04, 08:02 PM   #20
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I really thought Aus won... but i cant spoil the battle..... blah.. and anyways im battling ajax and it may look like a hat bote or DR or w/e the fuck...
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Old 10-26-04, 08:13 PM   #21
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Auspicious:

This kid needs to elevate, fuck miracle growth..
Cuz the only time ajax wiped me off.. was the bacterial soap..
^^hot shit good punch 8/10
Hes garbage.. hop off my style you dont seem fit..
Cuz i could bite, recyle, n' reuse his lines
..n' come off doper than he did..
^^good punch 7/10
Your screwed, you dont know what kinda trouble your soakin in..
Cuz' i'd tell him elevation is key, but he lost the door to open it..
^^lmao hott bar 9/10
I could say he was a challenge.. but thats too wrong to mention..
Cuz hes on the road to success.. in the wrong direction!
^^played concept 4/10
Im ruthless, i'll leave ya hand sting and back ripped..
Cuz if I flipped his lines to make em dope..
..........................He'd be doin handsprings and backflips
^^ liked the concept didnt like the punch 5/10

overall : 33/50 (66%)

ajax:

Your shit couldn’t have soul if you were saying sun in Spanish…
I got hunger for greatness too, but damn son ya famished…
^^hoot opener good punch 9/10
I know you got potential, you just can’t reach it…
Like a car with a governor, your never gonna be shit…
^^ehh decent 6/10
Shits a riddle, and Aus aint good at problem solving…
He loses to people not even at their peak, but still ‘EVOLE’-ing…
^^good personal weak punch 7/10
Before I started writing he was wishing me luck…
Look how quick he is to just give himself up…
^^not hott 3/10
Socrates might jump on his dick and say I have no chance…
But Socrates has to get up, so these two queers can slow dance…
^^just stupid 2/10

overall : 27/50 (54%)


overall auspicios's punches came a bit harder and more orignal and had a flow than ajax did... you used to be better than this kun what happened
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Old 10-26-04, 08:16 PM   #22
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See... I knew if i forgot to explain that punch people on here would think those two lines are pointless... Well... Just for everyone that has voted... Auspicious means Lucky... So... The line where you gave me a 3/10 flow, there is a punch there...
 
Old 10-26-04, 10:38 PM   #23
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Quit swaying fool.....Uppin.......
 
Old 10-26-04, 10:48 PM   #24
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ajax
ur verse was okay,and ur structure and flow was decent,you had some good punches in there,didnt really see any good personals in ur verse,and you had somewhat decent creaticity in your verse...so yeah props man

aus
you also had a nice verse kid,you had an okay structure and your flow was dope,and the personals were there,like that baterial soap line lol funny shit,i also loved the fact that you had some witty punches and with that you won...

word props to both for droppin good verses...

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Old 10-26-04, 10:54 PM   #25
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Originally Posted by Auspicious
Quit swaying fool.....Uppin.......


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They cant see my posts untill after they vote... Get the fuck outta here... I was stating a fact...
 
Old 10-27-04, 02:44 PM   #26
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W/e...........Uppin for the last time........leave a link..will return the favor
 
Old 10-27-04, 02:49 PM   #27
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Voted For: Auspicious

jea i read this earlier you merked my boi A JAX lol

auspicious: dope verse..this shit was crazy lol im feelin dis on da real....your opener killed it already...dope...your structure was nyce...ur flow was aiight...i was feelin it....vocab..was there...wordplay was dope.....creativitie: was real nice ui was feelin dat...meta's they was there..multi's didnt see to many

ajax: mayn...this was weak...u alwayz had the mediacore lines..never hot..never wack...but anywayz opener was ugly..lol i did not like it at ALL..almost made me cry...structure was good..flow was good..vocab was ok...meta's...blah....muulti's not alot..overall auspicious took this easily
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