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10-26-04, 02:57 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
shit was ILL home boy........nice peice....
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10-26-04, 01:06 PM
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IP: 5002 2F80
appreciate all feedback....
uppin....... pz
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10-26-04, 03:18 PM
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wow, this drop was dope, some great emotion and vocabulary in this piece, i was really feeling this man, and it all came together so well, great job,keep doin it.9/10..1
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10-26-04, 03:23 PM
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IP: 5002 2F80
appreciate feed....
right still uppin this but i'll start a new one to post now cos this has been up for a whole day n to me thats old....lol uppin
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10-26-04, 03:36 PM
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IP: 8F88 348A
damn, nigka, this was fiya.
Flow was off the chart. I really liked this shit. Vocab nice and all. Man damn, keep droppin' this shit. What you sayin' averagin, 7.9? lol this shit hot, nigka. Props. I give it 9.5/10 weeeeeeeerd. 
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10-26-04, 03:37 PM
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IP: 5002 2F80
lol i meant 9.7 dawg................
pz
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10-26-04, 04:23 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Not Much Could Be Said That Hasnt Already...
The Piece Was Off The Walls... The Content And Storyline Were Very Nicely Pieced Together... You Held A Nice Consistant Flow Threwout... Nice Imagery And Emotion... Vocabulary Was Pretty On Point... Uuuum, I Really Can't Complain About Any Of This... Overall Just A Real Consistant Dope Piece... I Most Certainly See You Becomeing A Real Force To The Topical Game... Good Luck Coming Up Threw The Ranks... Im Sure We'll Battle Eventually... Im Looking Forward To Our Collabo, You've Got Real Skill Kid... And If You Want A Rating, 9.2/10 (That Very Good, Most Dont Get Over 8.5 From Me)... .One. |
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10-26-04, 04:30 PM
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*big fuckin smile*
means alot from an established topical head.... n yeh the collab will be off the rails... pz
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10-27-04, 02:38 AM
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10-27-04, 07:06 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 80EF 45DD
Tight Piece Real Tight, I Felt This Piece. Man This Makes You Want To Never Drink And Drive. 9.5
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10-29-04, 05:24 AM
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still uppin
thanx for all the gud feed y'all, appreciated.. ......................
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11-02-04, 05:05 PM
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anymore????
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11-08-04, 02:40 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: C837 AA17
ya prem this was deffinately a nice piece, story line was pure emotion...
some real nice lines,many quotables...(but im not gonna quote them) much better then the previous drop i read..i enjoyed this.. structure was really good vocab was there... i liked how you flipped n mixed concepts within a bar changin the emotion that kept the reader very involved in the drop...overall for the length i was very impressed to see the amount of quality content that i did in this.. vevy nice drop....only place i could say a hint of improvement would be needed would prolly be in the closer, it was good but personally i like a closer that leaves the reader in aww....but its not easily accomplished... non the less this was a very good piece...props....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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11-08-04, 04:41 PM
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IP: 1566 5122
word thanx for feed dawg.....................................
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11-08-04, 10:44 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
not bad at all vocab was on point structure good kept to tha storyline....8.2/10 was feelin it...stay tru prem..........
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