8 barz
first to five votes must be explained no one-liners
3-0 is a ko
no dickrydin or haten
verse due 30 mins afta you see this thead
aight dawg no beef..........

Yo yo yo,,,
Aight dawg I said no 'beef' but that's from an 'x-tent'
Fuck sawin 'cowz' this kat 'porks' 'pigs' wit 'Dark-intent'
battle me ya 'trippin' like 'drunkz' on '12 stepz' payin rent
ya stuck ya 'dick'n a 'chevy' and still couldn't 'cum a 'vet'
like starz in the civil war i'll 'boot' ya southern dialect
'New-Orleans' is for 'Saints" the 'devils' my elect
buyin 'e-rect'-a-set wont help you 'elevate' one/ tent
wreck-ya-set on 'site' sendin ya back to 'wackbattlez.net'

aight i need to explain some of my word play cuz i doubt anybody will get it.
"x-tent' i was once part of dark intent
drunks 12 step program
starz symbyolzes the north and boot is the shape of LA

*alright no beef - but JFYI: I dropped ties with DARK INTENT 2, because I wanna ryde primarily and x-clusively with UP N COMIN'*

*Itz alright dog - I don't take "OFFENSE" - let the games begin - let the war "COMMENCE" - Although Intent don't mean shit to "ME" - you're the only one in UP N COMIN that I'd call a "WACK EMCEE" - I mean jeez "Bro" - You actin' like a "Ho" - callin' out a "LOC" - but when ya face that Killa - you'll straight up "CROAK" - It ain't fate that teamed us "TOGETHER" - but get ya shit tyght - bring something I'll "REMEMBER" - Ya ain't "CREATIVE" - Ya seem like a hasbeen - thatz cool though 'cuz thats how I "LIVE" - I like to rip otha peepz shit "OFF"- and bring it to tha boardz - but my stylez will cramp ya like ya livin' in a "LOFT"*

Im sorry - itz a little longer that you asked, but like I said, when I spit I spit, and there aint nadda that I want to go wasted or unheard, ya undastand right?->peace<-

Nevermind, it seems that way because of the way that it looks on this thing im writing on now..lol

umm ok here we go


my vote goes to creative cuz he was creative

but twiz i think if you would of not feeded from his veerse you could of came betta aight 1


my vote goes to creative betta punches and flow


100

1-0 me uppin for more......

Ah man nice spit now our crew can start doin our shit. when i get our message board up today i'll post dis battle there and everybody can help us to elevate our battles. peace

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uppin quit sleepin

I don't either party's verse was that great, but creative had a the edge over Twizt.
vote=creative
"c"2Versatile

ahy yo dont just say our verse wasn't good give some advice if you better den us..
2-0 me and uppin

uppin

Vote goes to Creative

he has flow to it and his punches were better, god to see the crew active and shid, keep smoken playas

Vote=TwistedKilla

Both verses were really bad. To improve you need to...incorporate multis or inners into your verse...work on rhymeschem....DONT EVER USE CUM LINES....Creative did no tlive up to his name by using thge single most oplayed line ever..TwistedKilla won this because his flow was beter...he sucked less, his punches were more drect too...work on the complexity fellas....

and go vote on OFF~CeNTeR vs. IllRhymePhonetic