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Old 10-27-04, 02:37 PM   #1
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PostmorteM - Serial Questions

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Double-U - She Was Black
Key Rogue - 9 Degree Battle
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This is the original version of a song we done not long ago that has been re-recorded and remastered with new effects and took out a few also with better quality (especially for those who listen on Hi Fi or MP3...Lo Fi sounds like shit so dont blame quality if you listen to it on that) and a few altercations with lyrics...the rest is sort of the same...for those who never heard it ....here's the final version...as well for those for who have heard the first version...this is track #4 on the PostmorteM EP coming out this week...

Song: Serial Questions
Verse 1: Stitched Morbid Lord
Hook 1: Dank The Fallen
Verse 2: Dank The Fallen
Hook 2: Dank The Fallen
Verse 3: Me
Hook 3: Dank The Fallen


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Old 10-27-04, 08:05 PM   #2
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Oh hell no...you bitches better listen to this
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Old 10-27-04, 08:15 PM   #3
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1st kid- kinda...off boring kinda style...stays at the same past...chorus aite....simplistic...but is aight

2nd kid- tryin to hard to get a big voice..lol but he str8 stays wit the flow....and beat

3rd....Smoka....nice...stays on beat get off at the end a little.....effect of heart bumpin lol nice

Overall nice...ya'll kinda fed of eachother but stayed str8 wit it

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Old 10-28-04, 07:33 AM   #4
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ehhhhhhhh.. this was aight...

aiight... flow was aiight..that voice he was using.. kinda was pushin me away from listenin... same with second dude..the flow they chose for the beat was aigght... first dude didnt have enuff sylables by farrrrr.. second dude had enuff sylables.. but he slang and the way he says stuff lol dont realy fit rap...smoka u were best on track... flow was aight.. none of the flows stood out on the track.. the chorus was aiiight.... again second dude sounds kinda korny hehe.. but its all good.. song is decent... just work on developin a flow and mic presence..
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Old 10-28-04, 03:39 PM   #5
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aiight listening...

1st dude- his voice aiight, needs a lil bit more emotion. Flow could use a lil work. Kinda broing. Lyrics were nice.

Hook- Voice um, is aiight. Hook pretty nice, could have been better.

2nd dude- flow was nice, could be a lil better. Voice don't like much, but his lyrics were nice. Not bad.

3rd dude- voice nice. Flow sounds good. Good effects used. Flow maybe fell off for one line. But lyrics I liked. Pretty nice. best on track

Overall, not a bad track. Lyrically it was tight. But it's still a pretty nice track, props and y'all keep elevatin. 8/10 pc Return favor in link below
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Old 10-28-04, 03:39 PM   #6
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Old 10-29-04, 10:06 PM   #7
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^I will check that ASAP....leave your links people...and thanks for the replies
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