http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/qakaprox.htm






^^^^^Click on "Niggaz Go Comatose"









Beat: I forgot...from S/C though
Lyrics: Q
Soundeffects...Q and www.findsounds.com
Production: Q



Jus tryna new ish...holla



Replied to:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1701002
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158009

Flow 8/10
Delivery 3/10
Vocab 8/10
Voice 3/10
Quality 10/10
Beat 6/10
Emotion 5/10
Lyrics 7/10

My Opinion. You'd be better on paper.
No offense. This isn't hate. You have good line's. But you have No Presence.


Doesn't catch me. Or drag me in one bit. I was focusing more on the beat the whole time.

**I do think you produce very well though.
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^^^^ That doesn't mean I can't improve on presence...which I am currently...

so BLAH @ u suggesting I stop rapping because I don't appeal to Carson...

ne way...thanx fot the feed


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and the song..is jokez....lol......u pretty dope....how old iz u again? .......u need a lil bit more emotion...NEVER MIND GOT DAYUM IT GETS BETTA WHOOOOOOATT ur multi's is crazy...nyce shyt...what LOL..multi's got me shook

Dayum the lyricz is fuckin crazy as soon as iget betters the fuckin Multi's and lyricz go crazy]

and the beginin is dope..I am THA Q........that shit is syck.....and dayum this is a dope track u shuld do audio battles..dayym u got me like dayum with this one hahaha

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^^^ Word...after listenin to this track 10000 times, the lyrics are good, but I almost went comatose listenin...MORE EMOTION NEEDED


lol...agreed...sometimes I worry so much about one thing I forget to add emotion

O Shit I Think We Got Anotha Multi Master

Omb Step Down Anotha Multi' King Has Been Crowned


....................word

If I was suggesting you quit rappin....

I'd say quit rapping. Instead I told you what you lack.
So you can improve. Take critisizm like a man.

That's not how u spell criticism...you're the worst damn speller on this site...ne way


I did take it like a man...I said, "just because I'm not great at something now doesn't mean I can't get better at it"...I recognize that fool...

neway...u said "U'd be better on paper"...why u mad cuz Im elevating?

gimme some time and u'll really have a reason to dislike me.


Nuff said


Oh..and take THAT like a man.

I dislike you?

I guess cause your gay right?
Anything to put a circle around your name.

Listen. it sounds like u readin off a page. So, In my opinion you'd be better on paper.
And...
Don't get so touchy....I said u need to work on things so u attack my one misspelled word.
Man....grow up.

Actually...lol...over the past few months, I've counted numerous misspellings...

And as far as your comments are concerned, oh well...at least people can actually understand what I'm saying, even if it does put them to sleep for lack of emotion...that's something i can work on...so do you kid



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i listened..

multis were cool.. your delivery really dampers it and emotion dampers it.. the lyrics were there.. but you gotta be clear and have somethin uniwue to it.. either the effects u put on it or something.. but the track was lacking that warmth and that oomph to make it urs, feel me ? cause lyrics arent enuff.. for audio u need at least decent on everything in order for people to feel it... if u just up your emotion alot, and ya delivery and make ya style yours.. u'll be solid.. -1

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Flow is onpoint- sometimes I think a little more emphasis on your diction would help alot... Quality isn't bad, I think maybe a little amplification might help though, Your flow is smoother than most though so respect there... peep my shit leave some feeds if u got time.

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