At Hardee’s

I ride plus abide dust shine rims as my mind stems
Lonely in away but hungry today as time dims
My code’s strong as I rode along paying no attention
Swaying low in dimension like dinosaurs a distinction
My sight flames like night trains aimed for Virginia
Down a track get clowned whack got knives like a Ninja?
Trip get bolder I seem to tip over like spilled coffee with sugar lumps
Even on a camel with two humps couldn’t handle this true junk
My style towers like wild flowers get praised lots
Hear strange voices need to change horses life’s not
Roses, even a pot’s lid closes sometime leaving stale slop
God fail me not so I prevail on top even when my Email drop
Creator of plot but now my radiator runs hot
My car boils went to Hardees for a charbroil
Like a legal eagle I glide in on the wind no recoil
Through double doors trouble soars but none today
A fast team must’ve kept the window glass clean at bay
A beautiful redbone awaits head strong take deep breath
The hunger grew stronger couldn’t wait no longer a sweet test
So I step to her may I help you sir?

hilarious... liked how u mixed seriousness wit comedy and still came ouut tight. however there were too many simile's.

EastCoast yeah thanks for the props for real yo

this piece i definately like.real,yet comical.8/10

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

Yo Tight Dawg Yo uAlways Come With SOme Good SHit I Give This A Full 10

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I don't know what drugs you were on when you wrote that, but can you tell me where to get them!?! Decent drop 8/10 I don't know if I'm being generous or if that was a good drop but it ain't no 10 sorry. I'd like to check it out on audio tho maybe it sounds good!! Anyways keep em coming that was a nice thread!!!!

thanks for the props yall for real yo can't believe yall read this

lol ... wtf ...