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10-31-04, 06:08 PM
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)))))))Grace(((((((-export from RB
IP: 0825 899A
yes.. I did this on RB..jus thought you all should see it...
its my mainstream like shit lol..at least as close as I get to it.. ************************* chorus:::::::::::::::::::::: Everyone has a place its like....where where you can handle pain... its like..grunts now when you granted pay.. now its fair? you just haven't found your grace... now don't give em none!!! they will it take away!!! they will crush your spirits nigga!! call it a phase!!! but they give you guns............... so they can take you away!!! nevermind what you done!!!!... there jury's eyes full of hate!!!!................... tell em you aint taking the bate you want stay in the gates give em a taste of your grase...like like like CHORUS::::::::::::::::: you fell into a cell..with no way in hell of earngin any bail..your family's business not making any sells hear the ringin bells..all in your head..think its all in your head...well its not in your head like the bald of your bread... world seems like we teamed.. not even a division..we divided so to those we will listen.. that determines the anger of who we are hittin.. let's shake the world like a crystal ball and visit.. every place with people you so called hate..then you can choke on race..race is the biggest race to date.. though the win in reverse...who will finish 1st and who will finish last..which race will laugh ,when our team will pass...away maybe I can laugh a day.. without being causious that someones life will fade... in the wind..and depend on a weapon for a lesson.. Bat's sovles beefs...knife's make a leak... ropes stop the brethe..and the guns stops the beat... CHORUS:::::::::::::::::::::: Everyone has a place its like....where where you can handle pain... its like..grunts now when you granted pay.. now its fair? you just haven't found your grace... now don't give em none!!! they will it take away!!! they will crush your spirits nigga!! call it a phase!!! but they give you guns............... so they can take you away!!! nevermind what you done!!!!... there jury's eyes full of hate!!!!................... tell em you aint taking the bate you want stay in the gates give em a taste of your grase...like like like CHORUS::::::::::::::::: if I wasn't rapping what wil happen,isn't pleasant.. you'll be closing the casket..wipe of my presense.. kill the holiday..lights off my presents...you walkin I will say..watch all they faces..you never know if they goliath and you'll be david..jus grab your stones they can tag along...though you ride alone... I"m sick of being peiceful man.I wanna be lethal man.. I'm being pushed around...while I'm being innocant I'm rapping away..my pain and just to take offense.. I don't care about making sense..you not even hearing this.. open your ears and hear..this maybe can benefit... jet off..I'm still rapping on the internet..I aint gettin anywhere.. I still see the same me.. lookin in the mirror..nothing change I still frown..top and bottom lip down..let it be down.. some usic'll turn it around..here my own sound..custom made I didn't pay much to say..this to you rapbattles got a new wave.. I killed the old game..now we gotta a new grave... gime new fame..my rap.......I got TRUE GRACE ~~~~~~~~~~~ CHORUS:::::::::::::::::::::: Everyone has a place its like....where where you can handle pain... its like..grunts now when you granted pay.. now its fair? you just haven't found your grace... now don't give em none!!! they will it take away!!! they will crush your spirits nigga!! call it a phase!!! but they give you guns............... so they can take you away!!! nevermind what you done!!!!... there jury's eyes full of hate!!!!................... tell em you aint taking the bate you want stay in the gates give em a taste of your grase...like like like CHORUS:::::::::::::::::
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10-31-04, 06:28 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin this....why won't people crit this?...
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11-02-04, 10:17 PM
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a yo im feelin dat shyt sick son stay up nigga 1
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11-02-04, 10:19 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
thank ya M.J.
I promote you to Mic burner
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11-02-04, 10:45 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
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11-03-04, 03:24 PM
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IP: E31B AA42
Not Bad.feelin' Da Verse.chorus Was Aight.keep Em Comin'
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11-03-04, 05:26 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
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11-03-04, 06:38 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
wow, this was great, nice hook, it had a dope flow to it,i almost heard this play out for me while i was reading it, good vocab, and style too, hmm,i wonder why this is being slept on...up....lol1
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11-03-04, 07:25 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
awww ma I love yo ass !mwah!
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