This is the first shit I posted in what? lik a year
So I'm bout to lay it down and make it smooth in here
Never had to bite to flow on a beat
Neva had to fight to get sumthin to eat,
I been fightin the world lately tryin to find peace of mind,
this shits exactly what I needed to open that valve to my rhymes
they startin to flow again just like the way that they did
back when I wasn't fightin in the corporate bid
now I gotta job tryin to get legally rich
but never bowin down never bein no bitch
never cheatin no one cause I'm to much of a man
To need to see people fall because of MY hand
I'd rather pick em up with a rhyme and a smile
and move em n a positive way for a while
but kids that step up and try to knock me down
they realize thae reason that Knowledge is the crown
I wear on my head,and pronounce in my name
cause knowin all the causes is the name of the game
that keeps you movinforward in this thing called life
and lets you see what other kids is missin in life
they think they gota beat on someone else for some strangth
but thats cause they be weak and got a soul with no length
they short, that's what I'm sayin cause they weak and theylost
but I come here to save em, but I don't use no cross
I just use understanding, pure logic and wit,
and let em know that there ain't really no secrets and shit
everything is there is you just look deep enough in
and then you find that truth that let' syou kjnow you gon win
That's all i got for my reintroduce
Let me know if you feelin it, and if it needs turnin loose

It's good to see you rhyming again

You still got it, if you aint been rhyming for a year

I liked tha lines



Don't take nothing

keep spittin

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Thanx man, shit just builds up and has to come out, ya know. Thanks for the feedback

dat was nice son im just getin back on my shyt 2 now check out sum of my shyt 2 kid holdin it down for Va niggad Daswassup

yee, i was feel'n this...mad respect dawg...

You had some ok vocab... overall good flow...

Yo e-mail when you get a chance:
goodasguilty@hotmail.com

Much Props..thats all i gotta say

Yo..how do u challenge someone on Verbal Venicular Victims?..cuz i wanna challenge someone

peaz

you post a thred in bitch slapped ask if any one wants to battle.. ( post the rules in the thred as well )
and when some one replys, go and set up Name vs Name in the Verbal Venicular Victims and post your verse and they'll post their verse, and then wait for votes....
aight, peace