x u know Im coo with u now right I was fuckin with u I do it to everyone!!! and d u think its better than all those corny ass rhymes i uesd against u in our battle?

naw your stucture is messed up still...try and werk off my verse for are battle i had soem punches that were iight but my lines were forced a lil but i still merked you...and my stucture is perfect and flows perfect..

yo this crew anygoodz.... i jsut wanted to see if idd make it in cause i dunno what crew i wanna be in yet... heres a quick verse...

im complex..more wordplay than confusion in ur text/
i'll let loose and use boots to leave contusions on ya chest/
severly i'll slay ya sentences cause a homicide investigation/
be mindful of who you're facin..i'll leave eyes and anus adjacent/
but lets stick to tha facts..i stay twistin ya back/
treat ya spine like cocaine habbits..and stay addicted to crack/
double up this thug wit uppercuts thats rockin ya neck/
knockin the left side of ya jaw up to the top of ya head/
as far as disses go...they're gay please make them end/
cause u stay under the weather..especially when its rainin men/

i say in ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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code steel

does anyone else think i made it in???

uppin for recruites..................

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Grim

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

yeah he's raw, just sended him a pm.............

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hey G:duece like this? if so lemme join but if no ill go away!



didnt ppl in school teach u not to fuck with me/
aint no one in any of my raps gonna get credibility/
to take me out your gonna need an organization/
so im takin your ass out by persuasion/
when u lose your gonna get kicked out ya crew and have a exclamation/
ill have u act different like a fluctuation/
man im gigantic/
ill be playin your ass as a gimmic/
man your shits old like a played out lyric/

lyric and gimmic dont rhyme right...and Gigantic didnt rhyme with anything in that verse..

For what it's worth in RIP..I vote No..

Keep improvin'...You need to up your game..

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lyric and gigantic rhyme!!!

nah...they dont...the only similarity is the "ic" at the end..

Thats one of your problems...not JUST the last portion or peice of a word should rhyme with another, but the other word should rhyme with the WORD..not the ending...

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For SHizzle Niggas Imma Keep It Long Beach

One(One)

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ay yo im here.. whoeva pmed me you guys wanted to ask me sumfink?