Uppin again.........VOTE FOR FUCK SAKE............

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Voted For: Nostradamus

nos-i liked the way you tackled the topic it was creative the way you flipped the meanin n suggested a whole issue that confronts us in life...it was relative in content n i enjoyed the read..opener n body of the topical was dope..ya closer was good....emotion was evident at times but not excessive...
deffinately a real intrigue'n read n drop....props
dabatos-personally i thought ya piece lacked a bit..story was there but at times it was like filler n the content of ya bars fell off, you tackled the topical in a straight forward sense...which isnt very creative opener n body of ya verse was ok..closer was better...but it did'nt overcome the creativity in nos's verse...emotion was ok...but you need to reword some of ya lines for better delivery n not fallin off the flow....
nos gets my vote for takin a creative approach to the topic
n keepin it on track with the topic....good battle...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Uppin.............................................

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Voted For: Nostradamus

Okay....this was a really good battle...at first i thought the topic sounded kinda weak...but you two both turned it into something nice...Nostra.........your piece i felt was dope as fuck....you had a lot of quotables in there....and wrote on somethin that touches to home with me..and a lot of other folks...

at the same time....I. Mind..your verse was real good too...i felt it was rather generic...but your set up and word choice made it really good....ironically..your word choice is what i felt was the difference in the battle...you didn't have lines that stuck out like nostra did...his word choice was a bit better...and thats what stuck out more than anything.....but very good verse from both of you

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