Listen y'all i'm on a killin' mode, so listen to my story and i'll let you know how this story will unfold.
It was around Holloween about holloween eve//
and me and my niggas were chillin, me gettin' my hair braid, this girl was puttin' in beads//
then we hear gun shots and screams comin' from outside//
we run out, and looked in the front and on the side//
shit i was like something is rumblin' in the bushes over there against the house//
other thug type niggas were scared, me, i was planning on poppin' whatever was in there in the mouth//
it jumped up, the grim reaper tryin' to do away with me//
i pulled out the heat started bustin', thinkin' shit this muthaFUCCa ain't gettin' me//
but the heat wasn't workin' so i nigga fled//
looked back for a mintue to see one of my niggas loose his head//
the son of a bitch was after me, levitating quickly, shit let me hop in this car//
hot wire it and now i'm speedin' down the strip thinkin' why is this happen to me//
then i thought...shit can't think of why he's comin for me//
is it my time? shit i think not g//

Hook(2x):
its dark outside and this nigga is tryin' to kill me//
its dark outside and my mouth he' tryin' to seal g//
what am i gonna do i'm runnin' against the clock//
and all i have is a 22 round glock//

fucc, i can't shake him, this bitch really wants my ass//
muthafucca is stickin' to me like gay men to straight nigga's ass//
damn and my ass, just might be grass//
it might be cuz' he's swingin' that thang like a lawn mower blade//
swirving thru the streets, cars hittin' each other blowin' up like gernades//
oh shit! i jump out quick, that muthafucca was on my hood//
shit let me dip to the hood, and put this nigga in some wood//
pop it out and slap in another clip//
like the hot boys "i shoot first" and caught him in his hip//
shit i feel like i'm trapped like george clooney in "from dust til dawn"//
damn this is a serious chess game we playin' he's everything else but a pawn//
boom,boom,boom, what the fucc was that, i look back//
shit this niggas is playin' some extreme golf with cars//
comin' down in rows, i'm being locked in like jail house bars//
this nigga is tryin' to crush me like a walnut, and he's the nutcracker//
is it over now, no wait there's my girl, jump out the way and hopped into her tracker//

Hook(2x)

"yo, nigga what's going on? who the fucc was that?"//
yo, my babygirl its that niggas death and he's on my back//
"damn dog, you fucced up..what did you do?"//
shit i don't...wait i think he's after me cuz' i popped this crew//
told her to pull over, cuz' it doesn't concern her//
i needed her car, but i ran without it, now my chances for living were paper cut slim//
fucc you bitch! i stood my ground, pissed him off and started advancing quick//
bitch swung and cut me, damn! you son of a bitch//
popped some heat in his head, shyt he's not dyin'//
should i stop now? fucc that i'ma keep tryin'//
finally he hits the ground, i won, ha ha, you muthafucca, bitch what now//
who ever thought i could lay that bitch nigga to the ground//
shit i walked away heard somethings, i quickly turned around//
OOOHHHH SSSHHHHIIITTTTT!!!!//
i woke- up in my bed with my head covered with sweat, scared lookin' like i just got hit//
my wifey grabbed my shoulder "baby what's wrong are you okay?"//
yeah i'm cool, just had a bad dream, she went back to sleep, i was about to but saw a cut was like shit//
sittin' there in my bed thinkin' "it was all a dream wasn't it"....

yall keep uppin!!!!!!!! gimme some feedbacc holla bacc

This Shit was crazy yo the 3rd verse was grimey but overall shit was gangsta

dats good looks.
keep uppin!!!!

Ok...Some Verses Were Stronger Than Others...Hook Was Nice...But Up Vocab...

you should up yo vocab cuz you rhymed the same words a lot.....but other than that i was feelin dis drop.....it told a sicc story i like story tellin hiphop.......

nice spit
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daaannmmmm... dawg!!! that's some hott shit..

yo.. honestly.. i don't usually read the whole shit motherfuckerz drop... but this shit tho.. It was like watchin' a movie... yo.. nice shit.. i was feelin' it..

-holla

Yeah man u got some style bro,keep it up u get yaself a deal.

DAMN THE IMAGERY!!
i was gettin scurred..
Tight flowin, Syn..i been feelin you since post one and you know this mayun...
keep this shit up.
peace.

yo thanx fam
keep uppn!!