check it......


We pack in a tight place it makes us harder to breath
And waste our money on nonsense but got daughters to feed
We pray to things we cant see operating on blind faith
Goverment put crack in the hood to increase the crime rate
Its a cruel world and you can see no love in they eyes
They say thou shalt not kill but send our soldiers to die

And if you feel like I feel throw ya fist in the air
Violent dreams, silent screams remeniss on despair
Its been a long dry season now its starting to rain
They say its the angels crying like when Martin was slain

The revolution right now, which side will u choose?
Democrats and Republicans want u to follow the rules
They want u to enroll in schools but the knowledge aint free
A glock can get you paid quicker than a colledge degree
Live by the sword so u gonna die by the sword
With ya momma on her knees as she cry to the lord

And if you feel like I feel throw ya fist in the air
Violent dreams, silent screams reminiss on despair
Its been a long dry season now its starting to rain
They say its the angels crying like when Martin was slain

The ghetto got blood like Minute maid cause we die for the wealth
Moments like this I cant weep out loud so I cry to my self
You need to check the score board you see the devils winning
If Jesus really died for me and u why the hell are we sinning?
Its hard to understand cause ignorance is bliss
When the angels blow the horn hope ya name on the list
But you cant speak your mind cause the truth they forbid
They dont care bout me and you they wanna get to our kids

And if you feel like I feel throw ya fist in the air
Violent dreams, silent screams reminiss on despair
Its been a long dry season now its starting to rain
They say its the angels crying like when Martin was slain

The rap game is the new slave trade hear what I say
You have field and house niggaz and it shows in the pay
The house niggaz sell records to the master they cool
And they crack the money whip so the faster they move
The rec execs keep u calm cause they lie through they teeth
Thats why we fight to get a bite and why we die for the beef


And if you feel like I feel throw ya fist in the air
Violent dreams, silent screams reminiss on despair
Its been a long dry season now its starting to rain
They say the angels are crying like when Martin was slain


Weerd

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damn yo this was sik......one of the nicest pieces ive yet to see on RV..........

......a lot of emotion and good vocab.........nice flow everything was perfect.......

overall - 9.9/10(only because i dont give out 10's)

keep up the good work..................

.........definitely an open mic award nominee.............

i forgot something......

*throws fist in air*..

Oh shit hell yeah loving your shit man.

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Lemme throw my fists in the air too.

*Throws Fist In The Air With Satisfaction*

lol

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lol thx for feedback uppin

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

undoubtedly the dopest dropp ive seen on here.............10/10

yeah, pretty sweet,,,

what da beat?