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Victims Of War
IP: B40D D41F
Shredded silk falls with the snow
Banners swept by sleety flow Raised but soiled, ripped to and fro Whipped by wind, black mud in tow Once there stood two armies here Proud and strong yet torn with fear Over corpses crows now veer Waves of dead corrode the clear Few lived past the gory fray Twisted figures lie astray Instruments of life’s foul play Sliced and bent, for death they pray Knee-deep in the blood they tread Clothes entwined with crimson thread Snaking coils of wet, warm red Slogging through death’s wat’ry bed Shaking fierce these shadows stand Undone bodies feed the land Slowly slipping from God’s hand All hid heaven’s reprimand Tortured minds push grief afore Broken men at heart’s frail core Souls chant haunted evermore These; true victims of this war These; true victims of this war These; true victims of this war |
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wow, nice vocabulary in this poem, and flow,this was an emotional drop right here, beautifullly worded....love how you end this...keep droppin dope pieces man...1
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thanks a lot for the positive feedback! i'll post some more poetry up in a minute...
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