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Old 11-26-04, 03:24 PM   #1
DrasticMeasureZ
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10 lines - U LEFT ME HANGING-

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The night I was getting jumped u walked pass me like in the mirror of ur eyes u didn’t see my face in your reflection
But I saw da corner of your eyes u kept walking and left me get beatin, I thought u was my boi u left me with rejection
I know u aint deaf, I was screaming your name, u kept walking with your head down, u didn’t even start to look back
Like u didn’t hear my heart beating, I felt my heart was in an garbage bag and thrown away out of your background past
I know u have an nose u didn’t smell my blood while its being erupted, u just left me on the sidewalk bleeding to death
U act like I haven’t been there for you ever since we was lil.babies like an book of fiction, the past to u its just an myth
I know u have nerves u didn’t feel my breath while I was screaming with agony, sad to see u living, but iam here with wings
U even came to my funereal crying your tears out, but to me I don’t think they’re real tears from ya heart I don’t see
Why u even came to my funereal and u left me to die without helping I don’t give them fake tears no credit at all
Even if you came up here in heaven, my feelings for u will never change, full of envy and black, now iam gonna watch u fall
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

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Old 11-26-04, 03:59 PM   #2
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I Feel U Dogg..if U Knew How Rap Was Supposed To Be Written Ud Kno That Bars Are A Factor So U Crackin On How My Rap Is Written To U Is Wack U Fuckin Poetry Ass Nigga Drastic Measures..is That Y U Wont Battle Cuz U Always Come With A Fuckin Story Pre-written...soft Ass Pink Nigga
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Old 11-26-04, 06:08 PM   #3
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eh like shut da fuck up.........................uppin for feedbacks
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 11-26-04, 06:47 PM   #4
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yo nice shit man, structure was off in places , but theme and lyrics was heavy. Peace
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Old 11-26-04, 07:14 PM   #5
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Yea Mayn, Nice Shit, Good Flow, Structure Off In Some Places, But Over All It Was Str8...8/10...and That Dude Needs To Shut Da Fuck Up...knucklez...~1~
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