uhuh kontroverzey aka KILLAH BWOY is back niggaz. this my new joint right here. Take it to the streets. Peep it out

http://www.soundclick.com/kontroverzymusic.htm


links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162812
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162657

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alright, reveiw time. you got a good voice if you utilized it correctly. you gotta get tha twist just right. your flow and lyrics are basic f'sho. but i can picture them improving. i peeped ur earlier shit and this is much better. but u still got work ahead. one peice of advice i could give u is not to mimic your influences, the thing that makes an ill rapper ill is that he's unique, you gotta be one of those influences that has beginers mimicing. so just elevate your OWN style and shit'll be straight. you gotta work on dem lyrics tho, they holdin you down.

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word. im just fuckin around till i get my studio equipment in. chu kno... but good looks

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here... ima be real nice, I think you got potential to make a nice track, but you have to stop rushing words into ur bars, I've heard you do it for a while but this track is really easy to point out... "Like black celebrity greats.... when you say celebrity you completely switch tempo and it ruins your whole sound... "we blast the gats"... when you went on that little rhyme scheme you were comfortable and you were just riding the beat, sometimes when you get on a 3 or 4 syllable word you rush through it like your afraid ur gonna fall behind the behind the beat... work on that, cuz thats one of the main things I think you really need to work on-- If you could cut that down, and improve your pronounciation a bit, I dont think I'd ever hate on you again... good luck. keep droppin.

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word word. thanx for the Honest feedback

Oh. and ill have your track done today

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uppppppppin. this shit.

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yea u rushed ya words....like Seven said....lol...sound like u got a spitty ass mouth or somethin...i guess thats pronounciation...vocals is to low..towards the end......O yea....

at the end...your echos r to fast..it doesnt really matter...but it would make it sound betta if u took time to play wit those switches to get it to echo insync wit the beat...

*listened again*

Lean back lines is played......

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[.Diabolic:.]

all dirty south shit is played haha.. so i didnt really mind that..

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uppin this....................

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uppin this aswell

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Uppin this.. tell me what ya'll think.

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uppin this because im bored....

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yea.. ya lyrics hold you down.. flow is aight.. i aint really feelin all that street shit tho... if you dont really toat heat... ehhh.... you know ? the closest thing i got to heat is a 22 my dad baught me LOL...... thats it.. so i dont say "i'll put lead in you like mechanical pencils".. and yes that is my lyrical genius .. lol but forreal.. if ya lyrics got sick.. then you would be a top head ne where.. what you spit is so simple.. that and i noticed on every track, its the same thing.. guns and bitches.. =/.. i'd say broaden ya harizon lyrically and content wise.. but i mean aint nobody perfect.. so i mean do you.. just elevate what you do.. safe drop tho.. -1

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