Battle Rules:

5 Bars (not Lines )
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-02-04 at 07:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 08:01 PM.

Aii Here I Go

Ayo Im A Str8 killa Make yo Life A Livin Thrilla
Hit Ya Wit da Pilla Make Yo crew Cova Ya Ass betta Than Chin Chilla//1

ill Pop thru Ya Vess To da Top Of Ya Chess
One Word to Describe me......Spectacular YES!!//2

So Stop N A Fuck Ya Gurls Like my Man Kobe
I Rock N Roll Ya crew so They call Me Bon Jovi//3

So nigga dont fool Wit The Clique And Dont fool Wit The Dip
Bcuz Ill Take Ya Left Leg off So All you Can Do Is SCIP//4

I come on the scen N Give niggas like you da cold shoulda
Somebody call This Dude And tell Em The Ends Ova//5

I Hope Yall Liked it

SCIP has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 10:30 PM.

i got ya right here

Instead of spittin fire your mouth be spittin more red than ink-jets/
Call this battle a poker game, cuz scip raises the bets while this cat tries not to fret/

I aint over-rated like the yankees, I'll hot more home-runs on you than the mets/*
King~Dipset your rhymes so you disrespect, the only way u leavin is wit out ur head/

This cats punches are wack mine are so flaigrant that the mods could call fouls liek NBA refs/
If you caught my rigth I'll jaw you wit my left,my rhymes so good you can't handle my press/*

This cat aint lyrically the best,freeze your heart make you think a cops givin you a Cardiac Arrest/
I'll get you off my chest as if i was benchin,my rhymes could puncture even a tefflon vest/

Finisher:
This Cat Thinks he is Julez Santanna, just for battlin me I'll throw this monkey a banana/
This battle will get more views then Fox's tv shows, sorry dawg just say you got ripped on camera/

*1st one- im basicaly sayin that his punches are liek fastballs movin slow that i can hit
*2nd one- Press liek news paper get it liek text

uppin this one peeps

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Illest Warriors

Voted For: King~~Dipset

i voted for king dipset because he had harder punches and better multis
Punchesip
Personalsip
Multisip
Openerip
Closerip

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

one of tha biggest reasons i had to go wit dipsett on this one, is cause scip's barz were just too strectched...i couldnt really find any hard punchs in there also, so i couldnt vote on you in this, that verse just didnt catch my attention
dipsett had a nice verse, he kinda fell off near the end, but it was coo..structure was decent enough for me, not really any big stretched lines in there that i read, punches were there also..thats why u took this, more consistency, and a better flow...one-sided to me...
overall-this was a easy battle for dipsett...

return a HONEST vote on battle in sig peoples..plz///1

Voted For: SCIP

Finisher was a little weak, but overall was a definite strong battle for you. Other guy's was whack. King, your's would have been better suited to an audio rather than a text battle. Nice verse SCIP.

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wait hold up the one dude had all votes for me but voted for dipset how is that possible thats a bullshit vote or he doesnt no how to vote

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Illest Warriors

Voted For: SCIP

wow...........scip gets this for actually dissin his opponent.........

scip-structure was mehh............stretched lines..........had so aight multies......pretty good metas and punches.........overall you came harder you dissed him

KD-seemed like you werent dissin scip.......you had like one decent personals......you didnt come as ahard as scip.........your punches weren;t hittin as hard

v/scip

yo a mod any one can see truths vote was fucked up and its kind a bull shit/hate vote cuz he wants to battle me and he dont have any wins and its kind inaddequate so remove it or somethin

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Illest Warriors

Voted For: King~~Dipset

King~Dipset
dont put the //s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure was pretty good.. flow was pretty good.. no multis.. wordplay was pretty weak.. a few, at best of ur punches connected.. u attempted a personal..

SCIP
dont put /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure wasnt very good.. some of ur lines were stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. u had a few multis.. ur wordplay was played to hell.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
SCIP has more multis.. King Dipset had the better structure.. the better flow.. the better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and more attempted personals.. so basing off of that, King Dipset gets my vote..

VOTE - KING~DIPSET

Voted For: King~~Dipset

THE ONLY WAY TO DISCRIEB DIS IS SPECTACULAR ,HOT , AND FIRE

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Voted For: SCIP

Alright. This battle was close and to tell the truth, I had trouble trying to pick a winner. The main reason was that both had some real big flaws in their technique. For starters, can I just say that its not good to use symbols in your text, such as " / // etc etc.. Its also a big to number your bars..

I think both of you definatly need to work on punchlines, I did notice one decent attempt at nameplay from dipset, which was:

So nigga dont fool Wit The Clique And Dont fool Wit The Dip
Bcuz Ill Take Ya Left Leg off So All you Can Do Is SCIP//4

If you had of worded that better and made a dope lead up line, then it would of been a good punch. Both of you seemed to use a lot of self glorification in your verses which is also not a good thing with battles.. Self glorification is good with freestyling, but when your in a battle your only aim is to clown the other guy.

SCIP, your lines are really badly stretched dude, that was another thing you needa work on, because what I read there really didnt have any flow.. Try rapping those lyrics to a beat and youll see what I mean..

Anyway, Im voting for SCIP because I feel that his bars had more substance and were more focused.. Both of you need to elevate a lot.. But youll get there.. In the mean time, have a good read of this battle and try to write more like this on your next battle.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=87057

Peace.

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