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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
11-30-04, 09:16 PM
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Empty Bottles(Taste My Medicine Finale)
IP: 3EA6 9C50
So pay attention as i display wordplay on these cowards,
crack ya bones outward, give you a shock like usin toasters in showers, who feels my power?duplicate of a legend eatin pussies speech up so watch your words get devoured, inside ya minds, like i commited a mental crime,make ya hearts sublime, pace myself, so "watch" S.A. throw ya body into "clocks" just to show you a waste a "time", killin herbs, destroyin ya wordz, your verse has beenn corrupted, cuz my shits blazin like Mt.Vesuvius just erupted, what you see isnt me, just a child with lost fantasies, High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys, drop flow wit ease,but who im tryna please?, muh shit fo-eva "STAY-ON-TOP" like "LITTLE-BIRDIES-IN-TREES", so sick you thought it was a disease,not-a-diss,but you best be scared-of-this, cuz i be "DROPPIN-BOMBZ" on niggaz like i was a fuckin "TERRORIST", "O Lord!S.A.,you are killin em my friend, please slow down" *stops and takes a few breaths* "Alrite, start back up again", verse to wild,only people like him able to get these words compiled, like my style?only givin it to you mild, cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD", remainin the best, killin the rest, regardless if you already knew me, Damn, I still kant believe this cat is only "A FUCKIN NEWBIE", Fracture-Skulls,Bury-Souls,And Then Leave No Witness, Told U Im Not To Mess Wit,2x4 Did And R.I.P.'s Outta Business, Cntinue To Yap,Just Go With That,Just Kill You In My Raps, Know-The-Facts, "Knock Down Ya Back" So Ya "Spine-Collapse", Taste-My-Feeling,A Supreme Human-Being, S.A.'s That Godd,Kill Ya Body So Maybe Your Death Is Worth Seeing,(get it?) Peeps Feelin Me Everywhere,Step To Me And Get Shown Up, Cuz I Got More People Sayin Esey(S.A.) Then Mexicans Packed In A Truck, I-Spark-This,Rapture Yall Hearts And Then Leave Ya In Darkness, And Let Ya Internal Organs Decease As I Feed Upon Your Carcas,(eewww....) Feedback
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11-30-04, 09:29 PM
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IP: 3EA6 9C50
can a nigga get some feedback..........
and nomination for best rookie of november 
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12-01-04, 10:36 AM
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Houdini
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IP: 3F1B 4C86
Nice solid drop I'll give u that much.....Battle me rookie.
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12-01-04, 08:05 PM
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IP: 6A98 1FA0
lol.....ite....after my crew battle though.....i'll pm u wen i'm dun
uppin^^^^^^^^^^^
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12-01-04, 08:14 PM
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Houdini
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IP: 3240 794D
Aight man, Uppin this shyt
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12-02-04, 07:11 PM
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IP: B9F0 F3D3
uppin biatch............................
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12-02-04, 08:11 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: DF94 D16C
Your what? Half amazing
I feel that way when i get to blazing. Iz u sure ur that and not a cat who talks alotta this and that bitch ill bust you up with a bat im cold hearted and eager to kill it just goes along with tha street thrill gats and bats and bats and gats what u thrownin up player? i knock u out ffllaaatt  im not trying to be personal or shit like that...i just wanted to be introduced....wassup |
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12-03-04, 07:50 PM
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IP: 9F51 B617
bitch......u suck.....leave fucking feedback next time........
uppin....................
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12-03-04, 11:01 PM
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IP: 9F51 B617
can a nigga get feedback..............................
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12-04-04, 03:54 AM
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IP: 30BB A079
uppppppppp^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^
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12-04-04, 09:14 AM
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Back In Business
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IP: 9227 0965
not bad...a lot better than most newbs who come in here... you left other links in our try-out thread but they all say object not found... repost those links so we can see some consistancy...werd
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12-04-04, 09:22 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 8C24 2516
umm...
Things that need improvement- Structure, Take the ("") characters outta your verse.. don't use caps lock makes it seem more "noobish" ..well it was decent, some played lines like the terrorist lines, etc. but some decent lines, a nyce flow with some multies also.. hit mine's up- http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163796 stay up..
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12-04-04, 03:56 PM
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IP: 85AC E94E
holla.....i'll pm u tha links grammatix
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12-04-04, 11:38 PM
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IP: 85AC E94E
uppin............................................. .....
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12-05-04, 01:14 AM
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Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
not bad bro. ur kinda remindin me of Big L in a few of your lines -> "High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys". you need to work on ya structure tho but this was a pretty decent written. give ya 7.2/10. you got potential just keep on writing and u will improve. peace
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
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