Ummm.

Back in business and led never ghosted for me.

Oh yeah,
*Poop* is a bitch.

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I didn't try at all but eh:

Tryin to get fame by battlin the game, damn shame
His name 'konvex', cuz skill wise, we all out of his 'range!'
Smoke this bitch like grass, he won't last, his lyrics are ass
He's original? hardly...had to bite his fuckin name from math!
Like 'JFK', I deliver lyrical 'assination', this bitch is gonna be dead
Thinks he dope, but like this kid's sig says
...'It's all in the head!'
You tried for the council, i'm the reason you aint in the crew
He's dope? nope, just uses superior methods to 'kon' you!
Think your immortal, well yeah, at being wack by far
Hit you hard and leave him mo' spun then his avatar!

line 2: Konvex lens is used for people who can't see things far away
line 3: Konvex and concave figures, learn about this in math
line 5&6: JFK was assinated by being shot in the head, his sig says "it's all in the head" so i'll assinate him like JFK, it's all in the head the bullets, you get it, and also cuz ya he thinks he's dope but it's all in the head
line 7&8: Kon like con, his name is 'kon'-vex, also his memeber title says immortal, and his avatar is a disc spinning

The only line bordering on decency there is the out of range one. The rest is horrible.

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Tryin to get fame by battlin the game, damn shame
His name 'konvex', cuz skill wise, we all out of his 'range!'
word
Smoke this bitch like grass, he won't last, his lyrics are ass
He's original? hardly...had to bite his fuckin name from math!
almost
Like 'JFK', I deliver lyrical 'assination', this bitch is gonna be dead
Thinks he dope, but like this kid's sig says
...'It's all in the head!'
too simple
You tried for the council, i'm the reason you aint in the crew
He's dope? nope, just uses superior methods to 'kon' you!
wiggity whack
Think your immortal, well yeah, at being wack by far
Hit you hard and leave him mo' spun then his avatar!
wiggity whack x 2

Almost word at shad......I mean gunit

I've seen better.

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I didn't try

I think gunit should drop a verse.....a recent one.

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I feel bad merkin you after L.I. just fucked yo ass up
Way you get beat, is like you wear to much make up (whored.... clowned)
Didnt see this merkin comin, like I murdered you in stealth
I dont like insultin you, but "for$aken" you do it to yourself
You can ask you crew for salvation, but there laughing to
And I'd tell you to pray to god, but he has already 'forsaken' you
Tryin to battle an mc like me, why'd you even think to bother
Battle is lookin like starwars "For$aken I am your father" (sonned)
My rhymes are like hot sauce, they leave you 'shakin'
Your physcick, saw ahead of time and named yourself For$aken

lmao ya, first battle on this account, way before I elevated, n e ways rate

I feel bad merkin you after L.I. just fucked yo ass up
Way you get beat, is like you wear to much make up (whored.... clowned)
nope
Didnt see this merkin comin, like I murdered you in stealth
I dont like insultin you, but "for$aken" you do it to yourself
nope
You can ask you crew for salvation, but there laughing to
And I'd tell you to pray to god, but he has already 'forsaken' you
noooooooo
Tryin to battle an mc like me, why'd you even think to bother
Battle is lookin like starwars "For$aken I am your father" (sonned)
oh lord jesus no
My rhymes are like hot sauce, they leave you 'shakin'
Your physcick, saw ahead of time and named yourself For$aken
*throws up*

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fuck is dis american idol are ya mods? r ya recordz perfect? no losses? den ya shoodnt b talkin shyt about otha niggas smell me cuz ya also lostat least once smell me 1

No I don't smell you fortunatly for me.

But we are some of the best on the site and have been screwed out of wins.

Plus, they respect our opinion's enough to drop a verse.

Soooooooooooooooooo, STFU.

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^^lmao at this kid^^ your an idiot, these guys are of the few who know what they are talking about.... I wanna rate to, I know how to rate a verse

Am taking over for Mike...... let's get this poppin, me and phantom

Bored so..... 4fil verse vs. Sabotage

This verse took me a while... but I didn’t flee rapverse
Takes thought preparing lines, all about you wackness
too simple man
He’s flowing electricity, but if he has power I doubt it
He raps so shocking;. he could cause a power outage
wack
He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich
Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch
pre school shit
“Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see
Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me
wack
Most kids got an alter ego but this kids got an ultra ego
“The building blocks of life” his blocks are just plain Lego
Getting closer
Another council member… must be their worst employee
Sabotage your whole operation, at trying to dickride me
gay
Hes to elusive, cause he rhymes wack so hes unnoticed
The council, their laws to be wack, so this is my protest
wack wack

Your trying to hard with the structure, your putting to much focus in it, take a look at some of the sites legends and how they battle, try to elevate from there, your coming too simple

No you not..... =)

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