#1...Phoenix claims my "flow" is boring because I have a basic rhyme scheme...

hmm...He just put his foot in his mouth because it's obvious he doesn't listen to my shit before he critiques it...or he's jus plain stupid...

Let's examine my "basic" xxxxxxxa/xxxxxxxa rhyme scheme as he put it.


Here's an excerpt of the lyrics from one of my recent tracks:


"And I ain't talkin 7/3, he's never heard/the herb who neva learns eva disturb Q on planet earth, u stay in a skirt/the stains in my shirt remain from my disdain for your worth/ so what I'm sayin is your worth ain't worth more than ur brains in the dirt/it's plain I been irked since the day u claimed u was first/In this food chain, it remains to be heard so what u sayin is absurb/









U ain't got to like what I said...or even HOW I flowed it...but how the FUCK is that a xxxxxa/xxxxxa basic rhyme scheme


get da fuck outta here...

Yeah q you got some dope shit, but your vocals should be louder.......


and that right there isnt basic at all,,,,, he is a fuckin idiot.....


Peace

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hmmmm... with the exception of your last track... Im not sure your rhyme scheme is too basic, but you have a boring to listen to flow on most tracks I've heard from you... like I said with the exception of "Hey I"... I honestly really liked that one. But I compare you to triple n kinda... I respect triple and think he got boatloads of talent, but generally his tracks are boring as hell to me, its just opinions on the internet, if it ever pisses you off that bad just unplug.

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hit eneter after each line foo

wheres the "eneter" button? I cant find that shit.

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that could be the worst attempt at comedy i ever seen

u know what i mean, dont act petty

ok.. lets see.... dadadadaada err..dadaaa errrr.adaadada errr.. is exactly how that sounded.. xxxxxxa,xxxxxa muthafucker.. i know wtf im talkin about.. your recent, yes, i liekd it.. but all your other tracks.. i didnt liek at all pretty much.. i didnt even drop feedback on your new shit u asshole.. take criticism.. i droppe du a fucking book about how i felt about your shit.. an then i make one negative comment and you get all pissy.. and ice pick watch mouth.. i aint a idiot.. stop making assumptions ffrom corrupted data... it makes you the idiot.. you dont even kno wwho i am.. lmao.. w/e.. you guys netcees that i dont give a fuck about.. but on with that i was saying...


tha q i gave u one fuckin negative comment.. only cause you came into another thread sayin how you were better than somebody.. all you did was be a hypocrit.. am i correct ?. Yes.. i am. so dont fucking take on critic and have it out weight a fucking essay i wrote you on about helping you get ya quality up.. matter of fact, ima fucking post it again to show u how much of an asshole you right now over one comment and OPINION...... dick..

QUOTED FROM A FEED BACK I GAVE less than a week ago:
hmm... do you use headphones when u record ?..you should.. and you should try some different mixing methods, cause ya voice dont blend with your beats most the time.. i can refer some pages to ya.. lyrics were good.. flow on point a lil more than half the track. that second verse sorta lost flow points but lyrics still stayed iite i guess.. overall it was a nice lil joint.just get ya quality up, and maybe a new mic lol... you can get a pre-amp from ebay that i got, 50 bucks.. and about 60 bucks for a studio mic on this site i got also.. MXL 990.. with a pop filter and you would be set for a while.. it'd be eooons better than what u have now i belive lol.... so for about 200 bucks.. you set ya self up ur own lik studio.. pre-amp, Mic, Mic-stand, Mic filter, and you use your computer as your mixer and effects and shit.. next thing u need is a soundproofed room (just a box tall enuff for you to stand comfortably in maybe with Foam covering the walls and ceiling).. thats what i do hehe.. cept i have a better mic and i baught a Signal clearner that send the mic signal thru my USB port instead of my mic on my computer port... but ne way.. stay up and i hope u take some of my suggestions for better quality.. -1...

^^ So fuck you and takle yo ego and turn it magically into some more talent asshole....

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^^^^^Well, it's quite obvious what the theme of my next track is gonna be.



Nuff said...



read da sig

P.S. Phoenix, I don't give a rats ass who u are...think before u open ya mouf...

expert? u think I have an AABB rhyme scheme...now there's someone who skipped English 101


AABB is every rapper's bread-n-butta fool


lemme guess, Jay Z is basic too?


fuck outta here

PS2...if i wanted to, i could shred Tito, you, triple, and the rest of these so-called dope heads to pieces...all i need is motive bitch and u pushin me in that direction



no respect

well.. im sry if you used ya bread and butta scheme on every song but your recent one......... kinda makes it hardf for me to form an opinion ona rhyme scheme you didnt fucking present till AFTER i made my comment..

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LMAO... you are sooo cocky man... first off.. i made ONE comment.. simply a fuckin opnion about your style and you act like a 16 year old bitch and make a thread about it.. i made other positive feedback.. but your bitchass chooses the ONE and only comment thats not kissin yo ass and make it a big deal............. and your the fuckin victim ?.. get the fuck outa here man.. and no, i aint gon say u coudlnt rip me, cause we've neva battled.. but i gurantee..... take a poll on rv or rb.. my shits better than yours.. thats whats up.. i didnt even want to mention skill level or nething with this.. but since you think you the best.. ima put you in yo place... you are average at best.....

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actually, i use a variety of rhyme schemes on all my tracks if u sit and listen...which u don't have to, but don't make comments from ignorance of someone's style...opinion is one thing...but delcaring what a rhyme scheme is is not...


and I'm telling your bitch ass that I have more arsenal thanxxxxxxa xxxxxxaa

fool


Furthermore, u can keep ur "positive" feedback...Ain't no mothafucka on here no true expert professional...we all doin this shit for fun or elevatin...EVERYONE...so u can drop the "u know who I am?"...please...

and I don't have an ego...im just sick and tired of know-it-all niggas tryna type-cast me into some mold cuz they don't wanna see a nigga shyne or elvate...

i remember when Carson basically told me to stop rappin cuz my emotion wasn't good...now, peeps say my emotion has elevated...what da fuck is it gonna be next son?


get outta here wit dat bull shit



I got an arsenal ya'll mothafuckas ain't even seen yet...im jus practicin when I drop tracks...honin in on my flow n shit...listen to the flows man...u can tell I'm holdin back



One more thing...U can call me average, that doesn't mean i am...but I don't respect your shit in the least...and Im not average in EVERY category fool...so stfu