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Wickedclown 3 37.50%
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt 5 62.50%
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Old 12-04-04, 07:03 PM   #16
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lmao, k fuck a breaKDOWN....
PAPPA we koo, but man you had no real hard hitting punches in ya whole verse really...ya lines were stretched n ya pretty much fell off in alot of areas...i see you were tryin ta get personal but nothin was layed out in a punch form..
shorten ya lines n reword ya verse, cuz this aint workin...
FLOW INTELL, k, i wasnt feeling alot of ya ish either, your 1st half was simple, or played, i was really watchin for personals..
then ya verse picked up a bit, 1 ok personal(w line)..
was dissappointed overall from both.pc....
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Old 12-04-04, 07:09 PM   #17
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Old 12-04-04, 07:19 PM   #18
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Old 12-05-04, 07:25 PM   #19
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Old 12-06-04, 06:41 AM   #20
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ain't voting jus checkin around im bored you see..
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Old 12-07-04, 04:42 PM   #21
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Old 12-07-04, 10:53 PM   #22
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Old 12-09-04, 03:38 PM   #23
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uppin for votes drop a link ill return the favor....
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Old 12-09-04, 09:36 PM   #24
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Old 12-10-04, 12:08 AM   #25
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iight here go my explanation

Wicked - NICE multiz decent vocab really long but itz kool sum shit iz basic but itz over shadowed by tha punchez nice structure sum linez r forced an stretched but i still felt this shit more then intellegent but hez nice 2 barely had any forced linez but ur elevatin again work on tha forced linez unless u start bein audio but yeah overall niceness couple linez i wuzn't feelin but most of 'em were pretty good so u got it at least in my eyes a couple linez i thought were dope where "Fuck your inteligent flowz imma rip ya a new ass hole
since ya daddy sodomized the first one and stole ya innocent soul" that had me crackin up but u went a little whack wen u said "out on the rap game, it passed you right the fuck by
now all you got is the net and thats why you cry" come on man u done WAAAAY better then that step that up homie i kno u can do better


Flow - shitz pretty nice 2 okay punchez personalz were mediocre...very blah structure needz work a couple linez were stretched an a lotta forced linez work on that but if u look past that itz pretty nice overall u had an okay vocab but wuz feelin wickedz verse more but better luck next time cuz i seen better from u an wicked but this wuz an overall even battle u only lost cuz tha forced linez an structure work on that an u'll be sum mad dopeness homie u didn't have any linez i felt were fantastically dope so i can't give an xample but herez were u went whack "I bless goons... You spit cuz its too hard to swallow this
When i get you confused & nauseated like RuPaul's Gynecologist" come on i seen better from u as it iz...i thought u would had this cuz i seen sum hott shit from u b4 but this battle jus wuzn't good 4 u

big upz ta both flow did nice but i think wicked came better so my vote = Wicked Clown
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Old 12-10-04, 12:26 AM   #26
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nice battle propz to both

personals-iight it was hard hittin on both....flow intellegent you had some crazy personals....talkin bout him d/r and shit...and WIcked you had some nice ones too....kept it close it was nice...but overall Wicked's fit a lil bit more better into his dropp.....kept it on topic....

Structure-Ok......Flow had this one by a long shot.....i wasn't really feelin the way you had ya stuff typed out WICKED..i mean it made it harder to read ya dropp......soooo Flow you get structure...

Punches-Ok....Flow ya punches were pretty much played....they was "AIGHT" and Wicked you had some nice punches...they hit harder....you didn't reallly have multies to get ya back on it...so the punches weren't all the way there.....flow you had decent ones....but they a lil bit too much played ya feel me.....

Vocab-vocab....was ok in this battle with both ya'll you all be sayin stuff i'd be hearing Really Good Freestylers using....so they were a lil bit played.......i did enjoy readin it but if the Vocab was better this would be a real nice battle.....but yea ya both need to use more complex VOCAB...i mean Love and Shove(WICKED) are basic vocab.....so up there....

Multis-Neither of you really had these so neither of you guys get this one...you guys know ya'll coulda dun betta here....i mean...i've seen ya'll battle before and i just wasn't feelin the fact you aint using too many multies..i mean thats what makes it tighter too read....ya get me...

Enjoyment-Overall i enjoyed Wickeds drop more.it was more hard hittin and it attracted my attention more..it was on point....it kept me coming back for more.......

Overall-Overalll i'd have to Say Wicked gets this one.....he came harder which is what you need to do...and thats what he did...so he gets the vote......so keep it up..and keep droppin.....

Notes-both of ya'll need to add some more multies and some more vocab...but otha than that this was nice....positve dropss.....keep thesse coming...and i'm expecting to come back for more...pzz ~1~
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Old 12-10-04, 12:30 AM   #27
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are you fucking serious 2 dickride votes in a row this is hilarious get the fuck outta my thread im gonna look for a dickride circle too... bitches wanna play lmao fucking noobs
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Old 12-10-04, 12:38 AM   #28
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Lmao... Whack battle.... No offense... Sounded like me out there... Only good line was george micheals line... Wicked... Wtf? So whack... Flow... *cough* Umm... At least you had mulites But since you had the only good punch, you win...

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Old 12-10-04, 12:54 AM   #29
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alright...being completely honest...this wasn't a close battle...wickedclown...i had to force myself to read your whole verse...i really did't want to..but i felt it would be unfair to not allow you the chance to salvage any chance you had left.....

flow....your verse was ok..some parts were a bit off...and the multis were ok....and other parts were pretty good...this wasn't up to your standards...but it was more than good enough to be that fuckin clown.......vote goes to flow...and to everyone who voted for clown...see me on rb you fuckin herbs

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Old 12-10-04, 07:57 PM   #30
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