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12-07-04, 06:40 AM
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iLL Newbie
IP: 5F8B 4CE4
Feeding On My Condolensences When I Reackon To Meet Wack Rappers...
And Appaulding Weak Emcees With Hetiful Truth I'll Smack The Clappers... And Thinkin About Improvin Skills Beyond Your Reach... And Listening To Others And Textin Ya Own Speech... Rappers Across The Globe Need To Find A Way To Progress There Spits... And Checkin Deals And Alofinating Others To Deals That Means You Aint Shit.. Rappers Spit For Glory For Componsitating Thats How We Express Thoughts.. And Thoughts That Feel Like A Dream, The SHit You Worked FOr And Fought.. Check My Stats Its Wack But That Doesnt Mean Im Trash... It Just Means Improving On And On Is Just Closer TO My Grasp...
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12-07-04, 05:03 PM
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IP: 79B8 64D3
uppin........................
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12-07-04, 09:04 PM
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IP: E66E CDAD
Your a newbie but you aint that ill...the only thing ive seemed to have noticed in ur drop was vocab....u need more multis n punches n wordplay....structure was good tho
5/10 keep elevatin
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12-07-04, 09:48 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C7A4 9F0A
it was pretty aight...ill give it a 7/10 cause u had good structure...but work on ur rhyme schemes...and metas...keep droppin...~1~...
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12-07-04, 11:13 PM
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IP: 9618 E6A2
all u had in ur verse was vocab playa and dont boast bout bein ill unless u are ill....
keep on dropin to get better.....work on structure and multis and usin that vocab for greater purposes....peace easy playa |
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12-07-04, 11:15 PM
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IP: 7C2C 2029
too short...up your vocab.nice rhymes though
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12-08-04, 01:47 AM
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IP: 7D11 8CB8
true i agree wit everyone else, u need to make people think when they read ya rhymes, put in metaphors that'll actuall make the reader stop and think bout it, when they do that, u know u spittin some fire shit
keep practicin and workin on ya vocab son
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