Replied To Lack Of Logic's Mask Murderers Diss

I'm ready to learn but im concerned//
that my yearn for cash will have me burned & stuffed in a urn//
A winner turned sinner now im just a beginner//
when i was a kid i hadto work 4 my dinner//
the quality of my life decreases every year//
i need shyt alot stronger then beer//
dis shyt i spit is sincere//
and from the belly like nas//
I'm a ghetto superstar fuck pras//
erything has a price my shyt aint nice but deez are true stories extracted from my life//
and Im like the hood//
so full of talent just misundastood//
even though i left the hood my life hasnt changed and i wish it would//
4 the better if it could//
erything is all grand when u the man but when u pushin a 89' sedan yo friends flip flop but when u got money in ur hands//
u think thats the master plan//
cuz in a second friends become enemies& and enemies wanna be friends all ova loose ends//
nowadays u cant even trust niggas das yo kin//

Nice Rhymes, te flow needs a lil work, but the subject is good so i like it, sounds alot like my "LOYALTY" post, go check it out dog,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=18560

Peace

I think this was pretty weak. nottin from rap plus I wasnt feelin it. u have to put emotions in it kid. not like lissenin to nas and sayin " aw look he flows for the streets" so Ill do the same lol

u gotta work hard

peace

ova all i thought it was aight, it wasn't weak, it juss needs a lil work. not ta say i'm an expert i'm juss lettin ya kno how i saw it.