ayo im bard and i bout to drop a keystyle lil free verse
chea check it....

im dat nocturnal type to dwell at night bring fright to
the mike fasta than the speed of light i ignite hard
ryhmes structerd by ill lines skick enuff to decay minds
lyrikal bak stabba that'a detach ya spine the fasta i ryhme
i find im blowin up competitors like battle mines i in my
prime the top of my game cum test me if im lie-in'
i leav you lie-in on your bak flat like irons
u cant touch me hows a midegt to slap a giant
it's impossible to conqa' this opsticle try it
get left in the hospital tellin the docta pain waz cawzed by OPTIKAL

...jusa lil 2 min deal i waz bored and it wasnt meant to b complex
at all

Ayo it was good but da first part was off ,but da rest was good

Young Mix

Yo i liked it, especially the verse wit the irons, good punches rite there
keep it up son

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