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View Poll Results: ..Lyrical.. vs Ruffridah187
Ruffridah187 1 16.67%
..Lyrical.. 5 83.33%
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Old 12-10-04, 10:25 PM   #1
J. Dubya
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..Lyrical.. vs Ruffridah187

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Old 12-10-04, 10:28 PM   #2
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Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 10:28 PM.
 
Old 12-10-04, 10:35 PM   #3
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Old 12-10-04, 10:43 PM   #4
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This dude thinks he's hard but shit it don't matter
Only 6 lines away now till his dreams shatter
I'm flattered you wanna battle ME but this one sided
You bite rhymes my dicks out come bite it
Get ya buddy his dick's out ride it that's the only way you'll win
Ya rhymes like paper and mine full of whirls n winds
Get the girls and friends so they can see ya get ya ass kicked
Get off crack kid you can't rap n skill is what you lackin
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Old 12-10-04, 10:44 PM   #5
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hey good luck this the first battle i've had since August
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Old 12-10-04, 10:51 PM   #6
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Shut the fuck up with your wack vocab…you lack dope lines
U Milk your flow for what it's worth…like you got lactose rhymes
Split Your Personality Apart…So Your Bars Aren’t From Different Points of View
This Day You'll Rue…Fearing The Mail…Because the Pain I’m Delivering You
Ruff Is Never Ahead…Nor Behind…Her Direction Is Wrong
Another Win Under My Belt…And That’s Where Ruff Belongs
Yep Its True, Ruff Is Addicted 2 Homo Ass…Let Me Help Kick Ya Habit
Ya Only Dropped Ill When I Bit Ya Check In…But Honestly…That’s It
 
Old 12-10-04, 11:28 PM   #7
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uppin..........
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Old 12-11-04, 12:02 AM   #8
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

Aii This Is what i think

Lyrical
You get my vote you had betta wordplay and stuff i was definetly feelin the way it kept that flow n rythm i like that....you need to work on personals a lil more so u can learn how to use them in the rii way mayne u feel me but i was likin ya verse i give it a
6/10

Ruffridah
Ok You Came Kinda weak but not real weak i was expectin you to come wit some precise punches and pesonals bcuz lyricals verse was strong so i thought yall was on da same level but u might've been off your game so ....I think yu need work on multi's and meta's then youll have a good verse but this verse lacked basics and thats why i wasnt feelin it very much
sorry
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Old 12-11-04, 12:18 PM   #9
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Voted For: Ruffridah187

Ruff got this.... your verse ws b a lot better i think..... i liked your pu8nches.. they hit real hard... I liked em.. you had a few strehed lines.... but its all good.... i liek it... your flow was real good..... you had some sweet mutlis in there too.... Keep it up....

Lyrical.. you didnt do bad either..... your lines were kinda streched too tho.... but yours were streched more than ruffs.... you had some good punhes in there too.. and some decent flow.......... but i amma hafta giev this one to ruff.....

Peace out~

Return tha fava \/ \/ \/
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Old 12-11-04, 06:57 PM   #10
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........uppin.......
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Old 12-11-04, 09:25 PM   #11
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uppin for this
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Old 12-11-04, 09:26 PM   #12
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

Blah...both definitely need to elevate. Both had decent flow...but both need to work on everythin else. Multies set you apart from newbies...simple as that. Get more creative wit ya punches...but this vote goes to Lyrical for at least knowing what I'm talkin about. He had some decent punches, but work can be done to both. No hate, just elevate.

Return the favor...thanks.

Topical: hipnoticz

Punchline: logic 4 dubz

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz
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Old 12-11-04, 09:31 PM   #13
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bull shit! but o well might as well up the shit.......
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Old 12-11-04, 09:43 PM   #14
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No bullshit...if you wanna start somethin, then speak...you wack. Face it, and elevate.
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Old 12-13-04, 06:05 PM   #15
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