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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-17-04 at 08:19 PM

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1mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 08:24 PM.

SR$ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 08:35 PM.

guess im here wit another thread, same battle, nothins gone change there//
im bout to murda this wannabe rappa and snatch his chains kid//
he claim he from tha MI but he aint really known here//
now i gotta delete his speech patterns and shut em up...hear?//
this cat is nothin, this battle aint shit but a waste//
i technically won last time if you aint unannouncefully leave tha race//
so now i gots to shove my thoughts in yo face, guess you want it like dat//
yeah im tha same guy dats bout to whoop yo ass wit my lyrical bat//
i bet you still on dat bull talk bout me not ryhmin//
well too damn bad your a loser and it shows cuz yo name aint shinin//
and when i say "shinin" im talkin bout yo bein all over tha place like me//
you just started? who gives a shit...certainly not me//
shit im tha new boss of tha newbees, bow to tha king//
you just a fuckin useless sperm cell compared to me//
i probably dont have a battle record as of yet bitch//
but i do have a little rep round here for havin beef and shit//
so its all good, after this im gone wait for you to respond//
and when its done and i won dont PM me and tell me dat you should have won//
cuz im just gone laugh at yo non flowin dick up tha crack ass//
move over small weight, you just got burned again by this volcanic mas//
bitch

*SR$ sits back and lights tha blunt...waitin for a response*

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SO DONE WIT RV

open mic night, yeah right, turn off yur P.A...
i'm sick of your fake verses their so cliche...
if you had some skill then this would be more illa....
but i don't need my best shit, this will have to kill yah....
i burn real netcees like gas soaked charcoal....
i spittin mad flames and you don't get a spark fool...
hook, line, and sinker, i'll fry you like a fish...
i'm servin up the main coarse, you ain't even a side dish...
i'm sick of yur lyrics, they don't rhyme worth a shit...
take a couple days to drop something legitimate...
i hope three days is enough pleez drop it hot...
cause next time we battle it'll have to be on the spot...
so re-think yur style before comin at me tryin to freestyle...
go home, get some money, and rent the movie 8-mile...
study hard and write somethin worth hearing...
yur words swerve like a car with no power steering...
yur words are weak you know they don't flow...
i'll bag you and tag you like a three dolla ho....
don't get discouraged it takes alot of courage to go against a pro...

Voted For: 1mic

You got room to elevate man. I'll fry you like a fish? Nah. Come with stronger punches and try to get some personals in. Work off his name and such...

I didn't vote because I didn't want people to think

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To think I was dickridin him... because trust me, im not.

That was supposed to go to my last post but my dog decided to step on the laptop...

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you a pro? sorry i guess i missed yo show//
dat flow wasnt enough, next time come wit some mo//
see i aint gotta leave a punchline cuz round here i stab//
and i use i 1pick for 1mic, decapitatin his ass//
get tha fuck back, in this round of tha race, you comin up last//
its Tuesday but i'll still Deboe you and put yo back on da grass//
this cat is fag, he dont realize dat SR$ got gats//
and i wont hesitate to find yo house wit a A-K to blast//
you a chump ass bastard dat we finally see tryin to do somethin//
get off my balls, grow some and then come back runnin//
i'll fuckin kill you nigga, fuck what you might think//
this aint PS2 but my "Ratchet & Clank" will make you shrink//
your nothin-nothin-nothin, how many times i gots to say it?//
and since you already hangin on my nut, grab a razor and shave it//
cuz man, at rappin you suck, when i let go DUCK!//
i already own 8mile, but on Greenfeild is where i catch my bus//
so what you can go do is send me a tape of proof//
that you can spit off da roof at and record record it all in tha booth//
cuz my time is golden, and my lyrics are frozen//
case closed, you cant win and im still gone be flowin//

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SO DONE WIT RV

uppin fo some vote 1-0!!! les seee some more votes people!!!

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im killin this guy...get at me!!!! he aint even gone put nothin else up. vote 4 me kid!

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SO DONE WIT RV

killa me? you wish! bitch you couldn't even phase me....
not even if you drew yah gat point blank and yah bullet grazed me...
trust me!! i'll murdah you and yah fake ass people...
better than me? ha! nigga, you ain't even equal....
straights only path will be straight into his coffin...
if he don't quit poppin off, then i'ma have to off him...
soft in every way, thats what you are, don't deny it...
cut the act, you have no skill, quit fakin, we don't buy it...
detroit don't have shit against LA so don't talk shit...
you say you straight well heres the line bitch les see you walk it...
thats what i thought bitch...your more crooked than a fag...
only thing thats going straight... is that dick up in yah ass....

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Voted For: 1mic

Vote: 1mic

Opener: 1mic
Ender: srs
vocab: 1mic - srs had sum nice words but dey didnt fit
wordplay: tied
originality: neitha
punches:1mic
personals: neitha
flow: 1mic
structure: 1mic

1mic - came wit a nice drop and tried 2 punch evry time - 8/10
srs - a verse full of fillers and weak ass punches - 6/10

no h8 return tha favour

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