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epic:

"...Xclusive..." Your Nothing Get "X'ed" Out No Excuses
Lyriclly Your Fuckes Cuzz My Rhymes Is Abusive
^^played 3/10
And'll Put Your RV Career To A Thing Called Conclusive
It's An Elusive But You Winning This Battle Is An Illusive
^^decent multies wack punch 4/10
Kid's Empire's Long Lost Son Now How Wack-Is-That?
White With A Hat? Sorry Kid But Uh..........Black-Is-Back
Lyrics Intact You Back Thaat Will Crack Ya Brain Threw Ya Hat
^^ehh decent for the first 2 lines 3rd one made it wack 5/10
Infact My Lines Will Interact With Your Punny Little Brain
That Will Change Ya Game Make You Pre-fix You Gay Name
^^ehh 5/10
Kid's Not A "Head" How Is It When He's Straight "Pussy"
Had To Dq Votes Cuzz He Couldnt Beat Oreo Tha Cookie
^^good set up wack punch 4/10
Kids A Joke Recycle More Lines Then Fucking Collage Rule Paper
Imma Sit Back And Wait Cuzz I'll Elivate To Tha Top Like A Sky Scraper
^^first line good second one self glorified and wack 6/10

overall : 27/60 (45%)

parallel:



Epic gets “emotional” when oreo signs on to rapverse…
Thats why they joined forces so they’d be a “happy” curse…
^^wack 4/10
Then catches a disease from oreo named the mad cow disease…
Now can no longer squeeze a shit out then ur eyes turn Chinese…
^^lmao 2nd line was so stupid it was hilarious 7/10
Pink is for “goofs” and then you try to wear it every damn day…
Who do you think ur pulling a steveO from “jackass”, im right eh…
^^good wordplay 5/10
Da R.I.P we da undead you “cant” fuck with us you useless maggot…
Nothing “can” hurt the undead and that’s why your such a faggot…
^^wack 4/10
The reason why you go with a “ridiculous” colour is becuz ur poor…
Your rhymes are “pathetic” that’s the reason and soon many more…
^^wack closer 5/10

overall : 25/50 (50%)

vote: parallel

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aight this the first time i gotta use the break down meth....lol
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opener:.Par
punches:.Par
structure:Par
personals:both
voacb:epic
wordplay:None
humor:epic
closer:Pat
overall:Parallel

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