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Old 12-15-04, 01:31 PM   #1
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Fed Up!

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As I look at the world I see the same old shit
Money, hoes, and clothes is everybody's objectives list
America ain't smart enough to solve the problems in it's land
But still sendin food and architects in Afghanistan
Every record you hear what niggaz did and shit
Whipped everybody's ass, but they skinny as a toothpick
These punk muthafuckas is silly to me
Think they soldiers cause they wear State Prop army fatigues
I'm sick of Bush talkin shit behind a microphone
When I wonder every night if my fiancé comin home
Alot of shit changed since my fiancé ain't around
Momma downin Jack Daniels will she ever put it down
I ain't here to impress you wit irrelevant lyrics
I'm not here to impress you with a stylish appearance
I ain't gone say somethin nice when I don't know what it was
Gettin notoriety as Nick Cannon thugs
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Old 12-15-04, 01:39 PM   #2
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As I look at the world I see the same old shit
Money, hoes, and clothes is everybody's objectives list
not a bad start

America ain't smart enough to solve the problems in it's land
But still sendin food and architects in Afghanistan
very true

Every record you hear what niggaz did and shit
Whipped everybody's ass, but they skinny as a toothpick
preety funny

These punk muthafuckas is silly to me
Think they soldiers cause they wear State Prop army fatigues
haha true and decent...

I'm sick of Bush talkin shit behind a microphone
When I wonder every night if my fiancé comin home
mines was in afganhnistan so i feel ya but she made it back safe.... thank god.. feeling this line...

Alot of shit changed since my fiancé ain't around
Momma downin Jack Daniels will she ever put it down
danm... sorry to hear that but i was the same way....

I ain't here to impress you wit irrelevant lyrics
I'm not here to impress you with a stylish appearance
decent...

I ain't gone say somethin nice when I don't know what it was
Gettin notoriety as Nick Cannon thugs
decent ending...


yet again u doing it up girl, keep droping them like its hot....
why dont u pm bizzey about TERROR-WRIST??
but this was a preety good drop, flow good, creativeness was decent, deep topic i see and emotion was express preety well but could of been slightly better but still tight....

7.5 outta 10

retunr the favor of droping some feed back on my open mic....
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Old 12-15-04, 01:46 PM   #3
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thanx I.E appreciate da love, already did well he pmed me first bout it lol......thanx 4 da feed n already returned da favor.....uppin
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Old 12-15-04, 01:49 PM   #4
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this was okay... I mean... you could do a hell of alot better but it was a good read I enjoyed it.

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Old 12-15-04, 01:51 PM   #5
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lol damn TOO many #'s lol but thanx 4 da feed.....uppin
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