i done paved da way,paved da
streets/paid all mah dues back
and glazed da chief,packin' da heat

niggas know not fuck wit me/unless
dae want dae want dae torso disconnected
and able to touch head to feet witout havin to reach

uh,its SouljaBoi,back in da
streets/and you know i be reppin
da Lou to da fullest,dont i be------

ready fo' any nigga dat carry a ghat
in his back left pocket/dats da last ya hear from
him,he got blasted by mah rocket

and to mah right socket,dis bitch
just gotta jock it/wanna hop up on
top and give me a good washin'

i flaus it,yo rhymes be so old dat
dae goin' rotten/mine stick to da bone
like doggy spit on a bone

ya flesh is gone,ya insides
is shown/im most proned to
show im da next king of dis thrown

im dustin and killin' catz
leave me alone/oh and before ya go,
write out yo atooooooonement

im not claimin' da title of king
but until den,crown me prince

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The Strong Walk Silent

uuuuuuppppppiiiiinnnnn for feedback holla

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The Strong Walk Silent

can a nigga please get lil feed from from di
RV community,huh

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The Strong Walk Silent

uppin dis shit come on people

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The Strong Walk Silent

uuuuuuuuuuppppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn' can i get some feed

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The Strong Walk Silent

why yall so damn stubbin c'mon holla back

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The Strong Walk Silent

not to be rude but you need help...your stucture and flow are good but you need work with being creative and some of your lines are super forced...pz

aiight dog naw its cool i like feed at least you said something....uh huh.....
but um uuuppppppiiiinnnnn holla,need mo feed

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The Strong Walk Silent

yeh man this was alright.........some of it was okay but you need to elevate badly........get more creative and have vocab......work on like multi's........meta's...............flow was okay but some lines seemed forced and at points ya flow fell off.........
return the feed..links in SIG

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fasho homie thanx for da feed as long as yall der
ya heard

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The Strong Walk Silent

kinda wack you need to work on it but the flow was nice.

aiight fasho thanx i like feed as long as im gettin it
so.......upppppin

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The Strong Walk Silent