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12-19-04, 01:15 AM
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..Rv Sucks..
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Untraceable vs X-Spitty
IP: 408D D2A2
Battle Rules:
16 - 26 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Dickriding TOPIC- put in a place from doing a wrong best of luck fam, no hate  Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 12-22-04 at 01:15 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by Forfeit |
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12-19-04, 01:16 AM
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IP: 408D D2A2
Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 01:16 AM.
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12-19-04, 01:22 AM
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IP: FD58 E3D6
X-Spitty has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-04 01:22 AM.
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12-19-04, 03:34 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
topic:trapped in saturday skewl :action: commence with the ducking out the doors in the back hall intense beatin of the heart beacuse im unsure of this call rushing to the car our faces are flushed from temperatures enter the house where we feast on this tuesday of december remeber this day for the consequences that will come yet unknown we eat on and speak on how we dont have regrets going back to the school we se a figure awaiting at the door reassure another its no bother but we dunno what's in store escorted to the office but we think it was trouble worth spent reported to the office a few days later recieving our punishment :consequence: the time ties on and the minds drift on awaiting the leave recievin directions but unabidedingly we're tryin to impede intrigued by thoughts im startin to become awknowledged polished lies makein them inticingly real from bein a hostage i refrain from followin directions my mind has dif perceptions perfecton is never an option, it is not an absolute perspective inspective on who remains shady on doing what is expected selective on who to mess with and to point out incorrections exceptions, there are none just a harsh and directive teacher preached her guidelines but they were trampled by sneakers sneekers are able to hide the state of rest their minds are in sharin books and work to those who are jus spacingly staring uncaring of the time not needed or to even have been spent incentives to rethink the actions took im beginning to repent abusing the time and deciding rhyme but im thinking its a fault walking out of this with worn feelings i realize things and sulk ....DON'T GET IT...DONT VOTE......
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12-19-04, 03:35 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
topic:trapped in saturday skewl :action: commence with the ducking out the doors in the back hall intense beatin of the heart beacuse im unsure of this call rushing to the car our faces are flushed from temperatures enter the house where we feast on this tuesday of december remeber this day for the consequences that will come yet unknown we eat on and speak on how we dont have regrets going back to the school we se a figure awaiting at the door reassure another its no bother but we dunno what's in store escorted to the office but we think it was trouble worth spent reported to the office a few days later recieving our punishment :consequence: the time ties on and the minds drift on awaiting the leave recievin directions but unabidedingly we're tryin to impede intrigued by thoughts im startin to become awknowledged polished lies makein them inticingly real from bein a hostage i refrain from followin directions my mind has dif perceptions perfecton is never an option, it is not an absolute perspective inspective on who remains shady on doing what is expected selective on who to mess with and to point out incorrections exceptions, there are none just a harsh and directive teacher preached her guidelines but they were trampled by sneakers sneekers are able to hide the state of rest their minds are in sharin books and work to those who are jus spacingly staring uncaring of the time not needed or to even have been spent incentives to rethink the actions took im beginning to repent abusing the time and deciding rhyme but im thinking its a fault walking out of this with worn feelings i realize things and sulk ....DON'T GET IT...DONT VOTE..........
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12-19-04, 03:37 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
opps acidentally posted it twice........lol my bad i just write it in the advanced to add like the font and add the
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12-19-04, 05:56 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F5E3 549A
no you didnt lol...anyway do i have to make two verses or what?
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12-19-04, 06:29 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
na just make one i broke mine down in two cuz i felt like it
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12-21-04, 10:45 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F5E3 549A
I need to keep my head high...
And need to affront life...fear in my eyes... Then i need too Kill this pedofile,... He's looking straight in my daughter's eyes... On his head It was a mask that he had... Shouted him twice while she's screeming... ''Dad!!! No Dad!!!''... But it was too late,and it was too sad... She saw her dad destroying a man's life so bad... 30 Minutes later,the police was at my door... Under the mask a family member... It was my other son,damn i felt like a whore.. The took me to prison,gave me a lesson... sended me to detention,feeling so much abandoned... How could this be worst?my life is now finished... I asked a nurse,she could help my mission accomplished... Giving me poison to die,no more fear in my eyes, R.I.P to my son,and for my daughter...i kiss you goodbye... god dammit...this is so wack man...my bad...lets battle another time after iight cuz fuck i hate this verse |
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12-21-04, 10:46 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F5E3 549A
god dammit lmao...this reminds me of me when i was a newby!!!!
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12-21-04, 10:47 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F5E3 549A
god dammit lmao...this reminds me of me when i was a newby!!!!...im talking about me dont worry your verse was fine lol
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12-22-04, 01:50 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
na dawg its strait i you prolly rushed it......i know your better...lol......but dont stress it we will have a rematch dont worry............cuz i want to see you at your best......my verse was rushed cuz im busy like no other right now.......but yeh man it was aiight it got the point across...........dont stress it..............
but anyway....... uppin this mother
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12-22-04, 03:15 PM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: F2C7 33D9
Voted For: Untraceable
I think he had a better flow more imagination and his closure was murduerouse I lvoed it but hey vote on my link peace. |
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12-22-04, 04:51 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: FD58 E3D6
did you read the thread by nostramadus??? you need to gove rteal votes
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12-22-04, 05:05 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Untraceable
Well X-Spitty Said It All ...................So my vote difenetly Goes to Untraceable ...........Clearly He Really did Do The topic way much betta than Xspitty.............So There You Have it Plain N Simple Even x Knoes it So there You Have it folks i hope i helped in a good way ...........now RTF in my Battle against Hang-man Please Thank you you are so kind |
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