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Chaos 5 100.00%
Zeke 0 0%
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Old 12-22-04, 10:03 PM   #1
Zeke
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Zeke vs Chaos

IP: 93C0 D1DD


Battle Rules:...

6 - 18 Lines...
No Crew Votes...
No Recycling...
No Biting...
No DickRiders...

Zeke(N.B.)... Vs... Chaos... (M.A.B)...


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Old 12-23-04, 12:05 AM   #2
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Zeke has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 12:05 AM.
 
Old 12-23-04, 12:09 AM   #3
Zeke
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Chaos Sounds Like I Cee At Tha Circus..
You Attempt To Spit But Ya Sign Says Out Of Service..
I'll Leave My Mark On Your Rekord With Lyrical Scriptures..
Cus You Beatin Me Is Imaginative Like Disney Pictures..
Your Skill Is Like Retards In Math Tryin Ta Solve Intergers..
I Flipped Tha Swith On This Bitch Puttin Him Out Like Light Fixtures..
Like Hydraulics Ill Have You Bouncing Down Tha Street..
Cus When I Grab Tha Mic I Help Out Tha Beat..
Theas No Rythm In This Gangsta Like Snoop Cd..
Hes Life Iss Based On What He Cees On Tv..
You Insests Fag Your Ya Brothers Lover..
I Fucked Your Mother In Ya Household Im Known As A MotherFucker..
Mentally Im Crossin Him Over Like Tha Proffesor And Hot Sauce..
This Uncooked Weiner Will Never Make It Ta Bieng Hot Dog..
If "Game" Wasnt His Dad Killin A Crip He Wouldnt Inherit..
I'll Eat Of This Cracker Like A Italian Parrot..
Hommie Get Abused 4rm Tha Verbals,Duckin Like Turtals..
Leave You Shakin More Than A Jello Commercial..


~1~
 
Old 12-23-04, 10:19 AM   #4
Recluse
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
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you were suppose to put the (MAB) and (NB) i the title.....not in the thread.....but whatever...lol....good luck...~1~
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Old 12-23-04, 10:44 AM   #5
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Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-04 10:44 AM.
 
Old 12-23-04, 11:07 AM   #6
Recluse
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
IP: A9DF 380A

Yo,Zeke
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I'll Rip And Dismantle Ya Whole Crew-And whip All Of You With Belts!!.....
Cuz This Kid Is So Wack-He Had To Get A Couple Winz....OFF HIMSELF.....
I'm Suprised!!-This Bitch Should Have Been Caught!!......,.
Like His Crew-All The Admins And mods Are Falling Apart!!.....
Your Not Dope Enough To Roll With The Best Crew!!.....
The Only Reason We Called You Out-Is Cuz We Had Nothing Better TO DO!!.....
You And Your Whole Crew-Is The Fucking Wack Attack!!!.....
Like Nerds Trying To Forget About Science-This Kid Needs To Forget About Rap!.....
And While You And Your Crew-Is Trying To Figure What Happened!.....
M.A.B Will Be Watching-And Like Carson Droping A Good Verse-We'll Be Laughing!!.......


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1.he's battling himself..but using his other s/n's...LOL..
2.his crew is crap and falling apart like admins and mods here..
2.we called them out.....but only becuz we were bored...not cuz they a threat...lol...
3.and you can figure out the rest....lol...
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Old 12-23-04, 11:10 AM   #7
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Uppin for some votes.....~1~
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Old 12-23-04, 01:52 PM   #8
Dabatos
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Voted For: Chaos

Vote: Chaos

Chaos: This was a okay verse, i've seen you do alot alot alot better,
Punch: 7/10
flow:6/10
vocab:5/10
personal:5/10
structure: 5/10
score:28

Zeke: LoL, does everyone on ur crew have funny names?? lol, but neways, your structure was also bad, but that doesn't really matter now in days..

Punch: 8/10
flow:6/10
vocab:6/10
personal:2/10
Structure:5/10
score: 27/50

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Old 12-23-04, 01:55 PM   #9
Recluse
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^thanks uppin for more votes.....
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Old 12-23-04, 01:56 PM   #10
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Voted For: Chaos

he had harder punches better flow more personals in his and most of all I think his closure was killer so hey hit up on my links peace.

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Old 12-23-04, 01:57 PM   #11
Recluse
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^uppin for more votes................
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Old 12-23-04, 02:20 PM   #12
.Judicial.
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Voted For: Chaos

this one was e-z to judge..both verses was good but C stayed consistent....Zeke u started to fall of toward da end..Chaos stayed consitent wit structure and punches thats y he get my vote

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Old 12-23-04, 03:51 PM   #13
Parallel
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Voted For: Chaos

Zeke:
ok first of all you need to work on wordplay alot more...your punchlines were kinda weak but they werent to bad...they were ight ok...try using less vocab you use to much it throws the flow off...o and the flow was throwen off as i said...stucture your stucture was not to bad coulda been better...no hate pz

Choas:
not the est ive seen from you but your wordplay was there...and your punchlines were there...the stucture was weak coulda been way better...your punchlines were mad there...flow was pretty good..and you used vocab in most spots where it was needed...nice peice..pz

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Old 12-23-04, 03:55 PM   #14
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This was feedback posted for Zeke

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havin a looksee @ polls................................
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Old 12-23-04, 04:01 PM   #15
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uppin for more votes.......
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