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| View Poll Results: the metaphor vs hang-man | |||
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5 | 62.50% |
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3 | 37.50% |
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12-28-04, 07:32 PM
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#16
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7F3B 517D
u 12-10 u just suck and it aint even cuz u a rookie u just suck
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02-14-05, 11:26 AM
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#17
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1969 9987
upp'in this bitch up up up up and anway she lows kiddies
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03-10-05, 07:08 PM
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#18
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7F3B 517D
upp'in to end this battle been up for a long time
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03-19-05, 11:37 PM
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#19
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1C00 44AA
upp'in to end the madness shit been up for months what the fuck
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03-19-05, 11:55 PM
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#20
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Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for hang-man
IP: D527 A25B
checkin polls nice name metaphor.....................
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03-21-05, 12:15 PM
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#21
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 522A 016B
Voted For: the metaphor
Votin for meta Meta got dis due to harder punchlines n a well based overall verse his flow was on check n he had a pretty descent structure Elevate on ya multies n thorw some hard personals n the verse meta itll get ya wins Overall ya verse was good jus elevate on personals n sum multies Hang ya verse was good but ened a lil soft n that threw me off Ya need sum personals n multies as well ya lines were a lil originial not very creative so try n get sum newlyics to spit at him I was feelin boht verses it all came down to punches n meta jus came harder with punches overall: Punches- Meat Structure- Tie Multies- None Personals- None flow- Tie good battle fams be sure to RTF n da battles |
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03-22-05, 02:35 PM
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#22
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Banned: Biting
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IP: C024 E429
Voted For: the metaphor
tm- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........ hang man - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10....... V/ tm make sure 2 return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=183063 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182879 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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03-23-05, 05:39 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 9302 BD5C
upp'in this battleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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04-05-05, 03:51 AM
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IP: CF4E 8780
Voted For: the metaphor
meta tok this overall i thought metas verse was better it was more focused overall and had some good punches...one thing though put some multies in your verse ..but otherwise not a bad verse hang man you need a lil work youi have the concept you just don't have the right vocab for it i suggest you go back and practice some .. both of you even up your structs and up your vocab vote//the metaphor
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