Battle Rules:

4-6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes as well

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-29-04 at 02:43 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Vinci has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 01:46 PM.

Hes Good He Swore,Claimin He Be A Rap Warlord,
So Watch Me Put An End To Static Like Pullin A Cord,
Battlin Me?You A Trip,You Aint A Good,You A Prick,
Da Only Tym U Spit Sick,Is When U Remove Vincis Dick,
Believe My Statement,Fact Is Ur Rymes Are Bent,
Cuz X Is More Played Then Star Wars Re-Inactments,

i hope u guys r smart enuff, and i dont have to explain nuttin

g'luck

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X-§tatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 01:55 PM.

blah! key...

im a lyrical murderder, i kill with my steel
lets get real, im popping V like taking vicodin pills
my flow sicker than the nile river, leaving you with shivers
i rip out ya organs with sick punches i DE-Liver
you just an imposter stealing a dead mans name
call this monalisa cause ive painted vincis frame

LMAO!

lol....good verse...i liked ur last bar.....uppin............

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checkin pollz.....good battle both-sides

shoulda just voted.....................................

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Voted For: X-§tatic

lol well..... heres my breakdown........


x static.....
im a lyrical murderder, i kill with my steel
lets get real, im popping V like taking vicodin pills
nice play off of his name....good concept...liked it

my flow sicker than the nile river, leaving you with shivers
i rip out ya organs with sick punches i DE-Liver
lol shit made me laugh....hit hard

you just an imposter stealing a dead mans name
call this monalisa cause ive painted vincis frame
decent closer....another good play off of his name and an ok personal

overall a pretty good verse....i was feelin it and u stayed consistent throughout every bar

vinci.............

Hes Good He Swore,Claimin He Be A Rap Warlord,
So Watch Me Put An End To Static Like Pullin A Cord,
ok opener....could have been better though...decent concept

Battlin Me?You A Trip,You Aint A Good,You A Prick,
Da Only Tym U Spit Sick,Is When U Remove Vincis Dick,
not too great...sex jokes are played....wasnt feelin it

Believe My Statement,Fact Is Ur Rymes Are Bent,
Cuz X Is More Played Then Star Wars Re-Inactments,
best bar of your verse....liked it....pretty good personal....

overall i didnt feel like your verse was that great....u had one good bar....one decent bar.....and one bar i wasnt feelin at all.....

so i chose x because....his punches hit harder....he played nicely off of vincis name.....and vinci just didnt deliver like x did.......no hate to vince.....just the way i felt about the battle.....return the favor with a vote on my battle vs. spektikul...check the sig...

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Voted For: Vinci

I felt his verse more not much to vote on but here is what I found
flow non
rhyming tie
opener-closer vinci
vocab vinci but elevate on it a little bit homes

hit up on my link peace.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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^^^^ learn how to explain a vote..................

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Voted For: Vinci

aii this is how i feel

X
I Liked your opening And the way you ended to but ya flow was kinda weak flowin in the middle but it was ok..........your vocab ? i dint really see n e good vocab in either of yalls verses o i left that alone ........um you lacked multi's but ya structure was nice.......now

Vinci
your opening was very weak i think You should atleast make the strongest punch in ya verse your first bar bcuz that makes someone want to continue readin ya stuff ................um....you lacked alot of basics like good structure or Vocab but you came wit a decent verse but it wasnt N E thing amazin to me..............There

RTF I Only Have one battle so Hit that up

^i keyed it Kid. if i had put any effort into this at all i would have easily take it. dont believe me? check my battle against x2daj awhile ago that everyoine slept on.