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Old 01-06-05, 12:03 AM   #31
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Yo Flow get on I need to talk to you.
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Old 01-06-05, 12:03 AM   #32
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blah its nothin..........topicals are all in how the reader relates...
n really aint no1's opinion matter.......unless you write as a living
then you kno what your talkin about.........
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Old 01-06-05, 12:04 AM   #33
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^ exactly.................
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Old 01-06-05, 12:04 AM   #34
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`DONT LET YOUR EGO BLIND YOU I MIND.....
its a known fact legend that if your semi good at text you'll most likely be the same in topicals....nos was a good battler, hence the reason why hes good at topicals.......i mind no disrespect but i thought you should be on that list n half that list is wack.......


Hmm, Well I was bad at text, but still can do good.. and no, i don't really have a ego, cuz I looked at the ppl in that list and saw that I have beaten half of them, and saw that one other person even in that list that i haven't beat has sed that I am better lol.. tite huh! lol, but yeah, I just hate being under rated... I've been here for almost a year, and have worked hard to get atleast the little respect I have now, Nos is good, I must admitt(Surprised too due to the amount of achohol he drinks lol), he has very good imagery, and I believe has the lyrics that Nas and Kanye would write, but I know that I can beat him, it would be close, but I know i can if I would take my time. The one time we battled, he beat me due to me starting to writte my verse one hour before the verse was due, (While Nos was bothering me by sending non-stop messages) lol.. wait, iono why i wrote all of that, but I just hate being under rated lol
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Old 01-06-05, 12:05 AM   #35
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blah its nothin..........topicals are all in how the reader relates...
n really aint no1's opinion matter.......unless you write as a living
then you kno what your talkin about.........



HE PUTS THE TRUTH WITH AN PERIOD.<<<<<<<<
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Old 01-06-05, 12:05 AM   #36
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oh yes and george k. stanza... dont sleep on him... HES NOT A BED


talk about a dope meta oooooooooohweeeee

lol jp but yea geogre is dope in topicals

as is someone that i cant remember their name he got banned for spamming

used to say picture me fucking your mum lol

i dont remember
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Old 01-06-05, 12:06 AM   #37
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Old 01-06-05, 12:08 AM   #38
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Hmm, Well I was bad at text, but still can do good.. and no, i don't really have a ego, cuz I looked at the ppl in that list and saw that I have beaten half of them, and saw that one other person even in that list that i haven't beat has sed that I am better lol.. tite huh! lol, but yeah, I just hate being under rated... I've been here for almost a year, and have worked hard to get atleast the little respect I have now, Nos is good, I must admitt(Surprised too due to the amount of achohol he drinks lol), he has very good imagery, and I believe has the lyrics that Nas and Kanye would write, but I know that I can beat him, it would be close, but I know i can if I would take my time. The one time we battled, he beat me due to me starting to writte my verse one hour before the verse was due, (While Nos was bothering me by sending non-stop messages) lol.. wait, iono why i wrote all of that, but I just hate being under rated lol

i kno we crewd together....nos is good because im sure hes been through personal struggles that he can relate to while writing to pull emotion from...while your well , im srry but your young n really havent lived through hardship< this is the impression i get while readuing your drops...
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ex, your like a poor person talkin bout how it is to be rich but in reality you got no clue of how it really is.,.......ya feel me..?
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 01-06-05, 12:11 AM   #39
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i kno we crewd together....nos is good because im sure hes been through personal struggles that he can relate to while writing to pull emotion from...while your well , im srry but your young n really havent lived through hardship< this is the impression i get while readuing your drops...
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ex, your like a poor person talkin bout how it is to be rich but in reality you got no clue of how it really is.,.......ya feel me..?



you know whats good about topicals, even if your not rich, you can actually put yourself in a position and write about it, that's what makes topical so great.
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Old 01-06-05, 12:12 AM   #40
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in your opinion, which is what
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a 15 year olds writing skill..?..??....


Im newly turned 14 =)
but thnx Anxiety ur dope too
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Old 01-06-05, 12:12 AM   #41
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i kno we crewd together....nos is good because im sure hes been through personal struggles that he can relate to while writing to pull emotion from...while your well , im srry but your young n really havent lived through hardship< this is the impression i get while readuing your drops...
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ex, your like a poor person talkin bout how it is to be rich but in reality you got no clue of how it really is.,.......ya feel me..?



Yea true, very true, but you forgot to mention, though u may have to expierience it to write about it, it could be written by people just with the imagination.. All you have to do is keep writting, elevate, n think more.. But i do agree with you, because in the topics about girl's, love, etc.. I have expierienced it, and can write about love anytime.. easilly
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Old 01-06-05, 12:13 AM   #42
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well i know young people who have been through alot and incorporated it into their poetry/topical pieces.. its all about their mindset.. you can be 15 with a mindset of a 30 year old. Me on the other hand have been through personal problems but i dont incorporate them much into topicals... more into poetry and open mics. but its all about your mindset... anyone can look in a dictionary and get words that are big and descriptive... but a true topical writer, needs no dictionary, all aspects of topicals are already set into their mind, and the emotion is also embedded into their minds before hand... you cant become a topical writer with the same mentality of a text writer, because basically it wont be good...


anyways dabatos is good at topical wether he's had hardships or not, but then again does that mean he's true to his word... because if i get a deep topical piece about something i've been through i'll put my heart into it... its all about your mindset
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Old 01-06-05, 12:14 AM   #43
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I havent been through alot...I live in the ghetto and still was sheltered....but alot of my fam has had a shitty life...blah....=)

and thnx for the mention flow
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Old 01-06-05, 12:15 AM   #44
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yes yes.blah...but dab id i mind,.who is a girl
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ll neva take notice of shit sometimes
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Old 01-06-05, 12:16 AM   #45
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I. mind is a guy.....his girl goes on sometimes....
educate yourself
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