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Old 01-11-05, 11:56 AM   #1
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Butters is free! text/poetry.

IP: CD6F 8221

yes im free, just accepting nice crews that have earnt respect through dominace, activity, and above all skill...
if i sound like the type of dude your looking for then drop your crews name.

heres my battles that are currently open.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...29&page=2&pp=15

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171451

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171243

yep...i know i delivered weak, but im capable of more...much more.

and then heres a little bit of poetry i presented to Dabatos..

My life doesn't seem complete without you company.
Scent's of rose's billow off your body, and stress my mind.
Vision's of me and you, run back and forth through my head.
Because i feel something for you, i have never experienced before.
I look forward to the day, when i can wallow in your personality.
And become close to you, share our feeling's and share our passion.
To think rational, would just be grinding my mind all about your feature's.
Word's cannot express my emotion's toward you, i just need you to know.
That i'll forever respect you, whatever and wherever life takes you.
Be there as a friend to console and heal your pain, and frustration.
Or upon your decision to metamorph into someone more than a friend.
Every waking moment, your essence is imprinted on my thought's.
And every time i close my eye's you are all i see and all i want to see.
Ringing you on the weekend, but you never answer upon my attempt's
Yet, you converse with me for hour's, but i get shutdown like withered roses.
I dont know if youre posing,i just cant detain the feelings that need to surface.
Give me a reply, to put my hopes to rest, and let me live my life with you as a companion.
Push my boundary's to contain you in freedom, and treat you wisely.
So, before you pass judgement, i just want you to know my view's.
That every soul, me and you, should become close, and become Two.
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Old 01-11-05, 12:53 PM   #2
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....Upping for offers.
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Old 01-11-05, 04:14 PM   #3
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yep still upping for offers.
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Old 01-11-05, 04:31 PM   #4
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Tryout for G Clique. I think you would be best in poetry/topicals.
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Old 01-11-05, 07:38 PM   #5
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Try out for Superior Method's, your poetry is amazingly good, so repost this try out in our try out thread.
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Old 01-16-05, 10:07 AM   #6
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there is no tryout thread in SM's forum, i dont want to create a thread...it'll make me look arrogant...upping this shit.
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Old 01-16-05, 05:40 PM   #7
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yo u know where its at.......try out for THE crew.....we gots the tightest crew name on rv.....click the try out link in my sig.......and drop some links there....thanks....so far the roster is me, the black plague, and black queen.......<---- dope
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Old 01-16-05, 11:33 PM   #8
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Aye mayne come To Lyrical Catatcylsm

For these Resons LOL

-Weve Been On Long Enough To Be called A Stable crew
-You Wont Be the only Person Doing Poetry - Bcuz I also do Poetry
-You wont Def Wont Be the Only Text Head
-And If you Wanna LEarn Topicals We Train In Topical
-Im Workin On gettin Mo Audio Heads
-we Def got an elevation room For the elevated lOL Text Heads

And alot More reason Which yoU Will know if You Jus Come and drop Ya name in Our forum

Peace
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Old 01-17-05, 11:59 AM   #9
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As of yet, there are no crews that interest me..
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