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Old 01-15-05, 03:21 AM   #1
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suttin ima keystyle up im usin the chorus from 50 an banks freestyle.....


[Chorus]
yo we cant stay alive forever
so when shit hit the fan then we might aswell die together
im high as ever more hoes an more chedda
Virt move around wit them pounds an barettas
yea faggot..if i want it im gonna have it
regardless if its handin to me or i gotta grab it


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typical hesitations critical hospitilized patients...
dispicibel fustrations im reachin raps pinical stations...
grip the pen an diss only the real could witness this...
cause by the time the beef comes out we be at your door like ja hova witness's..
"dope" like peruvien coke im back up an well rested...
you guessed it coffin tombs aids "coughin" wombs lyrics manafested...
a generic soul kids "copying" an pasten my lines like the parot told...
grin an bare it oxygen lows you same old hoes fallen in the same old mold...
like knowledge diseased flows siezed quick to spit!..but now just freezed..
followers follow the lead power an greed you pay in blood as it bleeds...
i know you heard of me concerned of me to hip hop?im like what hitler is to germany..
not a natzi or a kamikaze im "insane" but i dont roll witta posse im aged wit enternity...
i roll from (A)"Acrobat" to (Z)Zodiac but like ADHD stay low on the focus...
back to that swarmin you like inraged conspicuious locust's....


[Chorus]
yo we cant stay alive forever
so when shit hit the fan then we might aswell die together
im high as ever more hoes an more chedda
Virt move around wit them pounds an barettas
yea faggot..if i want it im gonna have it
regardless if its handin to me or i gotta grab it
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Old 01-15-05, 03:26 AM   #2
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weerd, dope shit fam......
seen most of dis shit already on AIM, crazy....
insane vocab in their man, and i see you packed WW1 in there.....lol weerd, i know how much you know bout dat shit, lol....
good shit man 9/10....
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Old 01-15-05, 03:29 AM   #3
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lmao weerd thanks for the feed man but you should peep my topicals if you want vocab this was nothin........ holla at yo mommas cookies.........
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Old 01-15-05, 03:57 AM   #4
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Agree, This Piece Was Decent Man, Nice Vocabulary In Here, Good Structure, Alot Off This Was Good, The Chrous From Banks And 50 Was Whack I'm Saying 50 Is Whack, And Banks Alright But He Can't See Fab Man, Back To The Open Mic Some Play In Here Nice Man Good Use To, 9.5/10..Yo Man You Should Drop Some Links Before Ish Pop Off Weeeeeerd.....

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Old 01-15-05, 04:00 AM   #5
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weerd as for the links ive been here since like may an drop feed on atleast 2 OM's a day i dont need to drop a link if i get banned for it so be it open mic has gone to shit anyway.......
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Old 01-15-05, 04:02 AM   #6
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Weerd Hommie I Feel You, Alot Of Nig's Dropping Whack Ish Now A Days Only A Few Actually Drop Good Ish, This Piece Was Good Here, Weerd

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Old 01-16-05, 12:49 AM   #9
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Shit was pretty dope, mayn..
nice vocab & flow on this piece

but overall nice shit Virtue...
keep doing ya thing tho

8/10

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Old 01-16-05, 12:50 AM   #10
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hey I liked it I think you just need a little work on nothing becuase this was a good peace so peace out and you get a 10/10 on this one homes.
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Old 01-16-05, 12:56 AM   #11
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i was really feelin this.. dope wordplay in every line.. good multies.. clean flow.. good vocab.. u just worked with it.. dope verse all together... i woulda picked a different hook cuz that song is old and officially done lol but besides that this was a dope drop

overall : 9/10
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