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01-15-05, 09:00 PM
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ready 4 wuteva
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Fearless
IP: 04DF 87D4
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i'm back at it again bitches......
aint nobody gonna stop me i'm ya present day shakespearian a man among boys half ya'll claimin a set but tha only guns u tote is toys half way thugs wont budge when i walk tha streets i aint goin nowhere some retreat but my feet is concrete sideways niggaz dont scare me with threats n playa hatin i treat 'em like masturbation how i bust while awaiting litigation i give not a damn bout ya organization or ya orientation crip or blood bitch or thug recognize who tha fuck u facin not a soul in hell can contain my lyrical expression it's a blessin my rap sessions take away depression n aggression puttin power in my possesion although i'm early in my teen years i show no fear shed no tears perservere through all tha hard times that await and come near my frontier these faggot ass prissy's n sissy's be actin bitchy think they got me shook shiiiiiiiiiiiiit........its clear i bucked them hoes down with just 1 look i'll ride for my nearest and dearest i'm prayin they hear this call wheneva u need a nigga......... cuz i'm fearless so many think they got me shook fearin they words too busy frontin cuz they know my rhymes worry they nerves i send this out to my nearest and dearest i'm ready to ride call on a nigga cuz i'm fearless when niggaz collide all of tha fake bitches, pussies, cowardly 2 faced bastards i'm comin 4 ya asses fully equpipt bitch prepare ya caskets be real with me nigga who'd be scared of u? call yaself hangman u can hang your damn self and call it through u just another gay man caught up in this world of real niggaz; mob figures with dreams u strive 2 kinive steadily comin up with 2 faceded schemes hoes like you wont get tha best of me ya played out takin tha fade route hang around me 2 long n you'll get layed out faggot hoes like you dont deserve to be foes you a peasent at my feet like a crackhead from south central u steady tryin to blow my meat while askin where tha fuck is crenshaw? i been raw mothafucka i been havin ya bitch give me tha rim jaw   realize in time i'm neva scared u know who this is? KILO- 704..........i'll straight murda u kid bitch niggaz like u....they gotta hear this coward bastards think i'm scared? neva that i'm fearless so many think they got me shook fearin they words too busy frontin cuz they know my rhymes worry they nerves i send this out to my nearest and dearest i'm ready to ride call on a nigga cuz i'm fearless when niggaz collide Last edited by .:DeAtH vIsIoN:. : 01-15-05 at 09:09 PM. |
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01-15-05, 09:30 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 64A0 EA20
Yo Nice Piece Need A Little Work But Thats Wat It Takes To
Make A Perfect Piece Yyo Holla Back Cb83 Im Tryin Ta Give Some Feedback On Any Shit That Cathches My Eye So Damm Be Proud Of Dat
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01-16-05, 05:51 AM
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Picasso Of Poetry
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IP: C8F1 49AF
you bit...oh no you didnt no one can write that wack-a-verse...jk.
that was alright but the font made it hard to read. |
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01-16-05, 01:39 PM
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hullabaloser
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
I thought It was pretty dope.
I think you could improve on how you word things tho, People here don't really usually take any OM's in slang seriously. By that I mean sayin 'Yo Dis Is Da Reason I kill Bitchs Dat Hit ME ' Wateva shit I dunno. But you got some potential tho, I can sense it, Stick Around, keep droppin, you'll improve lots. Just Stick To What you do, Ignore The haters Man. 1.
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