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Old 01-16-05, 09:26 AM   #1
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I just had a stressing day come home from college
Bitches gettin to me when all I wanted was knowledge
Tired of everything Im stressed about all of my mess
depressed im tryin to get my fuckin senses at my best
I ve got a hundred things I need to get off this chest
because in this world theres always gonna be some1 2 test
either at school or where ever the fuck you might go
theres somebody thats gonna always make u feel low
You have no idea whats running through my mind here
I wanna 2 stab you with a spear in a mouth penertrated out ur ear
I swear your gonna get killed next before you get sex
I keep ducking everybodys abuse like a fuckin reflex
my minds to complex......... it's way to complicated
Sick of people dissin me sick of all u makin me hated
sick of bein dabated and blowin shit up thats exagerated
You don't understand my back ground you bunch of clowns
If you experienced what i went through you would be down
These words are giving you a clear picture I don't fuckin care
But pop more shit fellas it's only fair to kill you so be aware
when you disrespect Im leaving you with broken necks
taking all of your money leaving you in millions of debts
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Old 01-16-05, 09:32 AM   #2
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i think you should stop dumping multies in your work...it takes away the quality..
decent drop though...4/10.
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Old 01-16-05, 09:42 AM   #3
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4-10 wtf that was a bit of a dumb score
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Old 01-16-05, 09:50 AM   #4
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you really cant take critism can you? stop dropping garbage then.....
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Old 01-16-05, 10:16 AM   #5
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your garbage look at your score before you judge my work least I got 8 wins unlike you 0-0
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Old 01-16-05, 10:22 AM   #6
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...thats cos im new dumbass..everyone starts like this you dickweed..i seen your stuff, talking about pension's and old people? you suck, thats why you got a fucking wrestler in your avy, thats ok if your 10 though, just stfu.
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Old 01-16-05, 10:28 AM   #7
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ive been rapping for a year now you dick head your name is zero so I think you should stick wid what your name is you fuckin loser...... why is rapverses filled wid a bunch of jocks like u innit just stfu you pussy.
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Old 01-16-05, 10:42 AM   #8
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i think you should stop dumping multies in your work...it takes away the quality..
decent drop though...4/10.


^^multies make your rhymes sound better if you didn't know - but anyway this drop was pretty cool - you had some good multies - i felt the story a little and where you are coming from - this was a pretty decent drop though - 6/10
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Old 01-16-05, 11:04 AM   #9
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thanks man........................................
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