Wat ya'll think of my favourite substance???


ROLL UP…….ROLL UP………
"Everyone who loves the marijuana, sit back and enjoy"……
My enjoyment and adoration comes from wen I was a boy
Not quite a man yet.... but still own some toys
The toys are different in my collection, but mum gets annoyed
Ever-still…. instead of He-Man figures that were fucked up
Nowadays it’s a bong I fill up and suck.

Think of weed as a rapper on RV that aint conceded a loss
Got no beef, cos no one wants to see weed dropped
the better the POT then the nicer the JOINTS
Potent smell too. Like a SKUNK, its to the point.
Anointed King of RV cos its just too DOPE
HEMP don’t make just threads it makes the strong ropes

Marijuana got its own barmy army of followers
Bob Marley fans love the man and some is weed growers
It will never stop elevating cos it always grows
And as the good times roll, the Buddha always flows

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uppin.

damn. some feedback pls

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yeah man...its all bout da treez...7/10 cuz it do make since if u read it and not try to ryhme it...i guess

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uppin for feedback people

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uppin.

god damn it!! feedback pls peeps.

wats good bout it? wat aint?

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Not bad, good ta see some rhymes dedicated too weed
Keep em comin...

6/10, could have been more creative in parts, but ya went at it, came a little hard with most of ya lines

Good solid drop or the mpost prt

Good lookin out

Peace

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pretty good drop.....i agree with ^^ it coulda been a lil more solid at parts but i liked an open mic that was dedidcated to pot

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good job man wanst the best just it was good make it a little betta next time 7/10