could a rose grow in the desert without rain/
could there be a struggle without pain/
bones broken witout strains/
thinkin witout brains//
figure that out strange wit no mathematics/
just rap tactics and spoken word that dramatic//
lookin at all the schematics seein witout eyes/
a winner witout a prize/
a sinner in most eyes//
so my head i hold high cause lookin down theres no ground/
how am i standin in a world alone now//
being so proud witout self esteem/
selfishly others seem to have dealt with me/
no veins yet others have bled for me/
life is like tivo everythings set for me//
not tryin to be the best but definitely qualify/
feeling immortal theres no way of a homicide/
could u kill a man that obviously can not die//
I can not try to resist destiny’s fate for me/
I am destiny’s child…Beyonce didn’t wait for me/
Lockin my money in a box wit a combination hastily/
is the only time life will ever be SAFE for me//
could a gun kill a man without bullets/
shot by a person without fingers that’s steadily trigger pullin/
all these lies u say….my attention I fear ur losin/
so I bring out toilet paper if i know im hearin bullshit//
Tell me how can I accomplish the right job im after/
If everybody wanna holla at me like Allah backwards/
Then I realize none of this drama matters/
go quicker rewindin urself than goin forward… estimated 4 times faster/
And I’ll spit it like 4 times bastards/
Meditate and space myself like a war time NASA/
And go forward in reverse like 4 times backwards//
So I can be stuck in the present past more like casper/
still movin on nigga im gone/
Im ghost listen and hear my laughter/
And if u didn’t get it… read it over, im reborn//

i liked this, it flowed well and i liked the opening lines, i think you put some emotion into this drop too......
Lockin my money in a box wit a combination hastily/
is the only time life will ever be SAFE for me//

^^^my fave lines...keep doing it 8.5/10

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anoda gud drop .................. 8/10.........altho kinda found the 'ALLAH' bit offensiv....................keep droppin......fire...... ~1~ peace

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lol awe im sorry its just a piece....but thanx 4 da feed guys really appreciate it......uppin dis shit