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new future new change
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dis is one piece i wrote last year since i aint got n e new written onez yet
The world were living in, Thing's aint the same There used to be freedom, Now the world has changed Pain - Anger - Guilt wipe the streets of this earth Ruling under states - Young mothers giving birth Babies being born with no will to live No freedom, No peace - Gats, Roamin the streets Another gun shot, Another one dead Ganja , Weed , Pot filling systems in our head The world as we know it, Is falling apart Violence - Bloodshed, weave their way in our hearts Everyday is the same, No work, No gain Illiterate ones scream to express their pain We can try to turn a cheek and create a change But no matter how hard - Things will always be the same Evil got us captivated hoping for a sign A vision or a wish, as we pray in our mind The plead from a newborn as it enters this life To part from humanity - Revisit the light The world aint the same as it used to be No gatherings, No peace - Ment for you or me A sign is what i hope for in the long term range A turn of the page, New Future - New Change Moral used to be, all for one one for all No one gives a toss, in isolation we fall Watchin were we cross, and guard our backs Piecing life together from the reoccuring cracks Media got us driftin with the tides of propaganda Lies in our minds, And sometimes we wonder Was life ment to be - Full of misery But life is what we make it, People choose to give or take it I hope for the horizon - Of a new change Pray to god for help - And to ease the pain A sign is sure to come when hardships flee Making life much betta, for you an me Theres a time for everthin, Theres a time for change Turn a new leaf - Things will never be the same Evil got us captivated hopin for a sign A vision or a wish, as we pray in our mind The plead form a newborn as it enters this life To part from humanity - Revist the light The world aint the same as it used to be No gatherings, No peace ment for you or me A sign is what i hope for in the long term range A turn of the page - New future - New Change Last edited by LADY_LYRICAL : 02-09-05 at 07:15 AM. |
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Dammmme deepness gurl, this was very deep, great vocab, hott flow,
hott all round verse. uping for my gurl this shouldn't get slept on.. Stay up 1~ |
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IP: 3450 F354
tnx ... lol .....most apriciate it ........peace
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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yea girl...this is some dope shit for real...the flow and vocab was good...it had good structure...keep that shit up...~1~
return the favor if you could http://community.rapverse.com/showt...165#post1946165
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Tnx................... Mor Feebak Plzz
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