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Old 02-09-05, 06:53 AM   #1
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new future new change

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dis is one piece i wrote last year since i aint got n e new written onez yet









The world were living in, Thing's aint the same
There used to be freedom, Now the world has changed
Pain - Anger - Guilt wipe the streets of this earth
Ruling under states - Young mothers giving birth
Babies being born with no will to live
No freedom, No peace - Gats, Roamin the streets
Another gun shot, Another one dead
Ganja , Weed , Pot filling systems in our head
The world as we know it, Is falling apart
Violence - Bloodshed, weave their way in our hearts
Everyday is the same, No work, No gain
Illiterate ones scream to express their pain
We can try to turn a cheek and create a change
But no matter how hard - Things will always be the same










Evil got us captivated hoping for a sign
A vision or a wish, as we pray in our mind
The plead from a newborn as it enters this life
To part from humanity - Revisit the light
The world aint the same as it used to be
No gatherings, No peace - Ment for you or me
A sign is what i hope for in the long term range
A turn of the page, New Future - New Change














Moral used to be, all for one one for all
No one gives a toss, in isolation we fall
Watchin were we cross, and guard our backs
Piecing life together from the reoccuring cracks
Media got us driftin with the tides of propaganda
Lies in our minds, And sometimes we wonder
Was life ment to be - Full of misery
But life is what we make it, People choose to give or take it
I hope for the horizon - Of a new change
Pray to god for help - And to ease the pain
A sign is sure to come when hardships flee
Making life much betta, for you an me
Theres a time for everthin, Theres a time for change
Turn a new leaf - Things will never be the same









































































Evil got us captivated hopin for a sign
A vision or a wish, as we pray in our mind
The plead form a newborn as it enters this life
To part from humanity - Revist the light
The world aint the same as it used to be
No gatherings, No peace ment for you or me
A sign is what i hope for in the long term range
A turn of the page - New future - New Change

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Old 02-09-05, 07:22 AM   #2
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Old 02-09-05, 08:58 AM   #3
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Dammmme deepness gurl, this was very deep, great vocab, hott flow,
hott all round verse. uping for my gurl this shouldn't get slept on..

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Old 02-09-05, 11:20 AM   #4
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tnx ... lol .....most apriciate it ........peace
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Old 02-09-05, 11:31 AM   #5
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yea girl...this is some dope shit for real...the flow and vocab was good...it had good structure...keep that shit up...~1~

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Old 02-11-05, 04:42 AM   #6
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Tnx................... Mor Feebak Plzz
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