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Old 02-16-05, 12:49 PM   #16
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damn...beat is dope...

first verse.... i like this style...pretty dope....lyrics....dope..kinda fell off in the end...


chorus...is dope...but not that catchy....

2nd verse is dope.....no fucking fire....your fucking dope dawg...
rhyme romance..lol

chorus....aight the chorus is getting more catchy....
more catchy...

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Old 02-18-05, 11:59 AM   #17
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yea that was hot i was feelin the song. The rhyme scheme is what i was feelin the most though. It didn't stay the same it switched up through the beat weavin in and out so it was nice.
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