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Old 02-19-05, 08:52 PM   #1
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The Night......Peep, it's hot

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Old 02-19-05, 11:14 PM   #2
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Beat/Production:
The beat actually ain't too bad, I wasn't feeling the beginning samples but when the beat actually kicked in it was sounding hot. Nice selection.

Lyrics:
The lyrics were alright, not above par, pretty much plain. They fit the direction of the song you was getting across.

Flow:
The first verse was decent, the hook is straight fiya, mos def like that hook. Second verse was alright, but not as nice as the first one. The third was probably about as good as the second. First had best flow.

Delivery:
The first verses delievery was nice, and the hook was just on-point. The other two were aight I guess...don't like that slow flow too much.

Quality:
The quality was ok, sounding a lil muffled and clarity through vocals could need a lil touch up.

Overall:
This track would be mos def be popular because of the hook, hook is catchy but short. This track is good, just up the quality and do stay on the grind. 7/10

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Old 02-22-05, 07:04 PM   #3
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thanx, just found out how to make my quality like 10 times better so my next one will be up to par
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