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02-22-05, 04:53 PM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Voted For: Buck.Shot
Buck.Shot Alright FIrst Off Your Had Some Decent Punches In Here That Helped You Out Alot, Personals Wasn't Good But It Was There, Meta's You Had Em' You Could Add Some Multi's Here To Help You Out But Other Then That Your Strcture Was Horrible No Hate Try To Line Up The Bars So They match Like Effects Structure, OverAll I'll Give You An 8/10 Effect Alright First Off Your Structure Was Decent You Also Had Better Vocabulary But I Don't Think It Helped Coz Punches Is The Main THing Which You Lacked So Try And Get That Up, Personals No I Don't Think They Helped You Need To Change Your Rhyme Scheme, Overall Your Verse Was Only Good With Vocab And Structure I'll Give You An 6.5/10 Vote-Buck.Shot Return The Favor Link In my Sig,
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