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02-23-05, 01:42 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Calamity Feat. Enygma & SevenThird - Arabian Renegades
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Dynamic trio - check us out.............
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/pheenixmusic.htm sound click cut off a a part of the title... - hoes track labeled "Calamity Feat. Enygma & SevenThird - Arabian Reneg" -_-
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02-23-05, 02:12 AM | #2 | |||||||
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beat is dope
whos on the chorus....shit is dope...... chorus is dope... calamity....shit is dope...lyrics, style kinda differnet but shit is dope, i like this shit.....nice shit, qaulity not as good as usual but shit was dope ENYGMA...quality is good, but it seems as if you are spitten behind the beat not with the beat.......lyrics was dope....shit was nice yo cant hate....i like that shit seventhird....quality is dope....lyrics is dope......emotion is mad dope....vocab is dope I SUCK.....lol emotion is mad dope.......i like that shit pretty dope who made the chorus.......shit is dope...... please dopr feedback on my track with ENYGMA and SEVENTHIRD
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02-23-05, 11:14 AM | #3 | |||||||
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ok name is ok kinda lame calm your verse was dope but for some reason when you rhyme to long i become bored wit ya flow i think its your voice you cant help that lyrically and flow wise you verse owned this all day enygma was ok not great not your type of beat here and you vocals was wayy way too low on it sun your verse aint really fit beat and hook is ok sevens verse was corny cuz he pussy and was trying to rap some tough shit so blah anyways overall not realy felling this track
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02-23-05, 12:10 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Yeah the name wasnt all that, it sort of has a nerdish name in my opinion.. The beat sounds nice, not sure if I can see myself rocking this beat in a club or car or party for that matter.. Calam, your shit sounded nice as always, you definatly got your style worked out good.. Enygma your verse was pretty good, it had a solid flow and although it sort of sounded kind of like generic 'I'll fuck you up' type lyrics, but thats common latly in the American underground scene so its not like its a major flaw or anything.. Seven your verse was kind of like enygmas in a way.. Your styles worked well on the track together..
I think this is the type of track you would put on a cd as filler.. It wasnt really main attraction type shit but it had an alright concept and was produced pretty well.. Good shit none the less.. |
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02-23-05, 03:21 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 4A77 32CE
word good looks ya'll.. dj, im ahit up your thread in a minute.. thanks for the feedback guys.. lol @ the name.. its supposed to be a funny/lyrical song.. like its supposed to be corny in every spot cept the actualy verses .. but thanks for peepin our shit man - appreciated..
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02-23-05, 04:11 PM | #6 | |||||
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Beat's pretty nice.First verse was pretty good lyrically. Voice was okay, flow was pretty good. Coulda used some more cadence IMO but that's true of nearly every track I ever heard on the net. Hook = weak. Second verse, needs a new mic. Getting manhandled on your vocals. Lyrics were good, deliv was good. Just got sonned by the mic itself. Third verse, lyrics were nice, liked the flow. 'Chunky' style, my personal fav.
All in all a good track. The qual on the second verse is what kept this from a second play for me. 1
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02-23-05, 06:08 PM | #7 | ||||||
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well, one word... I was listenning to some other shit.... this standed out boy, and I gotta say thats some good mixing ... critical and important to an ill track... singing ain't my style but it was still nice for sure, and the verse's was nice... flow was reall nice troughout the track, no complaints about quality... good looks yall for sure keep droppin the heat
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02-23-05, 06:34 PM | #8 | |||||||
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this shit was pretty dope dawg... loved that beat, who ever did the chorus was dope as hell.. like cali said, the name wasnt all that but shit was pretty good... good looks
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02-23-05, 06:46 PM | #9 | ||||
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I heard this beat off a soundclick but its nice...... the chorus is funny the nigga that cant sing who's did the intro , very nice song
First person - verse was nice, flow was good, delivery was nice, and lyrics were good Second Person - Nice delivery, multies were good, lyrics were cool, nice shit Third Person - You came out good... delivery was also good....voice was nice, plyrics was good These track was mad nice son
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02-24-05, 12:11 AM | #10 | |||||||
The Light
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lol thanks ^..was me on the chorus and intro fuckin around with harmonies... uppin
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02-24-05, 09:16 PM | #11 | |||||||
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uppin for some more feed back..
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02-24-05, 09:23 PM | #12 | |||||
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beat is good
1st...flow was on point...lyrics were good...delivery was good chorus is kinda catchy 2nd- flow was nice....best out of the 3 ...good rhyme scheme...lyrics were good...delivery was good 3rd- aight i'm feeling ya rap voice...i think you had the best delivery out of the 3...flow was good...lyrics were coo overall this was a good listen right here...peace return the feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178661
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